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  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Rage

    Hiya Veni, I'm here to review this poem of yours, let's take this line by line c: 1. "The rage in his eyes," Good start. But I find it better ...

    Apr 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I would write you a thousand poems...

    Hey hermione315. xJ here to review your work. Let's take this stanza by stanza and I'll list my nitpicks. Stanza 1: This stanza is fine, but I just don't like ...

    Apr 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: The Glass Floor

    Hi Wolfare1! Happy review day!

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Handprints

    I. Am. Batman. Hello happiestwr1t1ing23. I'm here to review your work once again. c: I thought this poem was actually very awesome! It had a good subject, not common, and ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: Don't Touch My Books

    I. Am. Batman. Hello Firelight, xJ here to review your poem. First of all, I'd like to know the big deal about this "book." Because I believe It's a bit ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Islands

    I. Am. Batman. Heyo theironnovelist, xJ here to review this short poem. This poem is great! But I do have a few nitpicks on it. This poem may be short, ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: The Suicidal Encounter That Saved (Chpt 2)

    I. Am. Batman. Heyo Perf, xJ here to review your Chapter 2. I really want to see more! Okay, usually I would make comments paragraph by paragraph, but I don't ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Like

    I. Am. Batman. Hi theironnovelist, xJ here for a review. Alright, I really liked this poem, but I think the title should be more than just the word "like." But ...

    Apr 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Dreaming

    I. Am. Batman. It seems that nobody has given this poem a chance! Well I'm here to save you, buddy. First of all, your poem seriously needs to develop a ...

    Apr 22, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Fanfiction Re: The Suicidal Encounter That Saved Chapter 1

    I. Am. Batman. Heyo Perf. xJ here to review yer stuffz. So let's take this paragraph by paragraph. Paragraph 1: Alright, this introduction is great. But I have a few ...

    Apr 22, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Nostalgia

    I. Am. Batman. Hey, happiestwr1t1ng23. xJ here for a well-deserved review. Let's take this sentence by sentence. Usually I would do this line by line, and take my sweet time, ...

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: the hero of earth chapter 1

    I. Am. Batman. Heyyy Chris, please don't take this the wrong way as I am just trying to be a good reviewer. But anyway, I thought this was honestly not ...

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Lament of the Butterfly

    I. Am. Batman. Heyo Doc, xJ here for a review. Hiii! I liked this poem, it had a nice vibe to it (I hate that word but whatever). Laments are ...

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken Houses

    I. Am. Batman. Heyo, Gravity. xJ here for a review. I liked the simplicity of this poem. You showed that even if a poem is short, simple, and straight to ...

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Speaking With Anxiety

    I. Am. Batman. Heyo, xJ here for a review. So, I do appreciate the depth and creativity of this poem. I also like that It's original, not a common subject. ...

    Apr 21, 2015


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