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She began dancing, trace of happiness started to glow think you should put one 'a' before trace. it sounds better. Yet, the familiar jingle, got her put of her trance ...

hello. I am here to give a review. I hope it will help you. first of all, it's awesome. it's a realistic poem. the plan of repetition is good. it ...

hello. I am here to give you a review. at first, I will point out some mistakes, Always knows how to make an entrance he does. I think this sentence ...

as I told you, I am here to give you a review of this story. it's beautifully crafted. I liked both the characters - James and misery. James begrudgingly opens ...

Oh my god! such a good piece of writing. at first, when I opened this one(I mean when I saw the title and clicked it), I thought it would consist ...

It is such a beautiful poetry! The way you described popularity is awesome. And your repetition of those three lines is also awesome. Overall, it's a thought provoking, realistic, literary ...

this is awesome. i think you wrote this poem just after waking from sleep( although I might be wrong. please consider then) My ideas weaved together to create creation i ...

both the poems are great. the first one about an introvert and the second one about a coin. i thing i liked the most is you wrote both in the ...

hey, i tried to re- write a few portions- It is always a pleasure for me to work with the most useful things in the whole world- our hands. Be ...

“Who are you, and how did you get in here? If people hear me talking to you-”“Don’t worry, don’t worry, they can’t hear or see me, only you can” I ...

to be honest, i didn't understand the meaning of the first two lines. can you please make me understand those lines? i would be thankful if you do so. rest ...

the message you wanted to give is just awesome. silence is really the best remedy. there are many peoples who always wants to see themselves in the top. and if ...

although i haven't read the earlier pats, but i thunk she(jerica) is lying in her story. am i correct?... yes I was correct- she was lying. you revealed it afterwards. ...

ahh! it's so beautifully crafted. i was in the world of imagination. i loved all the characters , especially hereissa. the beginning as well as the end- both are interesting. ...

She pulled the knife from her chest and smiled. “Was that supposed to hurt?” Her blood dripped off the blade and oozed out of her chest turning her gray sweater ...