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Re: Fool's Apology
Hey there! Forever here for a review! This was an awesome poem. A few suggestions Then i opened, got bit bold Maybe write it as: 'Then it opened, it got ...
Jul 11, 2021 -
Re: Randy Richards and the End of the World
Hey! Forever Here with a short review! This was just awesome! Let's deal with the grammatical mistakes first: “Listen son, for we do not have much time Put a comma ...
Jul 10, 2021 -
Re: Try To Be A Connector
Hey! Here for a review! First of all, there were many minute mistakes. I am rewriting it. There are two types of people: one who is like oxygen, they react ...
Jul 10, 2021 -
Re: Tiny bits of you
Hey! Here for a short review. First of all, I love your poem. A few nitpicks I have: You forgot it when you were here last You can write it ...
Jul 9, 2021 -
Re: twiwatch intro 1
Hey here for a review! As a first work, it isn't bad but it needs improvement. There is much room for improvement. Let me try if I can explain some ...
Jul 8, 2021 -
Re: In Earth’s Defense: Chapter 1
Hey back for a review! Let's get to the grammatical mistakes first. "However, we're facing a bit of a set back." Set back should be setback. I give you three ...
Jul 8, 2021 -
Re: Not The Best
Hey Anne! Here with a short review! I have spotted one grammatical mistake: He thinks I'm just a dried out rotten rose Put a hyphen between dried and out. I ...
Jul 7, 2021 -
Re: A Story Without Any E's
hey there! here for a review! Honestly, I can't stop laughing. I laughed a lot while reading this and still now, I am laughing. U really did an amazing job ...
Jul 6, 2021 -
Re: A broken bit of glass
Hey! I love your poem. I am here with a shorter review than the shortest review u have ever seen. Let's get right into it. First of all, good editing. ...
Jul 6, 2021 -
Re: One Day
ey there! Here for a very short review! This was a great poem. A very simple as well as a well written one. I like how you have repeated the ...
Jul 4, 2021 -
Re: Blood Sisters (Prologue) Jose
Hey! Here for a review! I saw the 9th part in the green room so I came to read it. I have only found one grammatical mistake: “Alright then…I would ...
Jul 4, 2021 -
Re: In Earth’s Defense: Prologue
Hey here for a review as I told you. Let's get to the grammatical mistakes first. But that’s besides the point. I guess 'besides' will be 'beside Feleth is a ...
Jul 3, 2021 -
Re: It Was the Season of Light
Hey there Valkyria! Here for a extremely short review! Earth tremors. She strains to bear the weight of her children's sorrows, but she grits her teeth and carries them. Verily ...
Jul 3, 2021 -
Re: lost piece
Hey there! First of all, welcome to YWS, and here for a review. Let's deal with the grammatical mistakes which I think are there in your poem. If I had ...
Jul 2, 2021 -
Re: Bittersweet Chocolate
Hello there! Forever here with a review! First of all, I will deal with the minute mistakes that I found while reading. "Do you even know, who you are?" a ...
Jun 22, 2021