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Re: Chicago Chapter Two
King Here You had requested the first part, but I want to review them all, because I got curious for the outcome of the firts part. So I will try ...
Apr 28, 2016 -
Re: Chicago
King Here as requested! Hello,here I am. I will try my best to look carefully at each part of this story and review it honestly. From now, I say that ...
Apr 28, 2016 -
Re: Rich
I feel like this is long distance relationship related. I had many relationships like the one you had explained. It is really sad and emotional, when you can not touch ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: The Lion Age #1: Hunted *Chp. 1*
King Here The prologue was a very interesting one. I started to get curious about the work and what it could be about. We still not know anything about this ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Six Months
I am usualy picky about punctuation and all these jazz, as you may had noticed already, by my other reviews. But actually, i really like this work at it is, ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Innocence
Hello,hello. This may be not really helpful, I am sorry for that. But I can not pass a great work. Such an annoying jerk I am, but what to do. ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: The Watermelon
King Here Hello,hello. I see this work is reallyyyyyyy short, but I think it still deserves one short sweet review from me, even if it will not help the improvement ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Tiny Angel
King Here Here to review and help, if possible, with your lovely work, that I just saw. i see you have enough review already, but I hope one more is ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Real Love
King Here I really love the way you start and the thoughts put into this work. Well, I love the theme in general, but this work is great, with the ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Happy
King Here So, I found an adorable rhyme at the very beginning again, and I am really stunned. I think I start to love and adore the way you write ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Future Sky
King Here So, hello again! I just wanted to check most of your lvoely poetries, so here I am now. I love the tittle of this work, from all your ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Feelings
Hello there,Rashi! King is here ~ I do not think this will be a very very helpful review for you, because I did not find any mistakes in this work. ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Poet
King Here This review will be short, I am deeply sorry, but there is no other way. I still love your work, even if it short, well, it is a ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Weary Eyes
King Here Hello. Here to check your work. I really like the emotions and feelings put into this poetry. I think you had done your job, writiNg this, very well. ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Crashing
King Here Hello there. I will now check your work and go through it. It looks like a really good work, I hope you do not mind, if I read ...
Apr 27, 2016
