ConverseFireGirl

This is really good! You actually had me captivated by the first few sentences. Great work. When the mum said that he deserved a treat, I was like "ahhh" and ...

This is a really nice poem indeed once again, defyingravity! Your flow is pretty much perfect and I usually don't review rhyming poems but I thought this was most certainly ...

This is a pretty powerful poem! You've done yet again a great job here, fortis and your works never fail to grab my attention. I agree with Fiend on the ...

Oh my..!! This is amazing, someone today was saying that they were going I cut their wrists and inside I just felt anger like your character, I mean it's LIFE ...

Hey there, Strange! Right, before we get to the good stuff, let's get the constructive criticism out of the way! So does this fall into poetry? I'd think more short ...

Firstly, thank you for giving me a mention, I feel so privileged. ^_^ :D Right, so, brilliant poem here, your descriptions are marvelous and the title "Watercolour Winter" along with ...

Wow, this is amazing. I can really relate to what you're writing about, which could be part of the fact why I like it so much! :D So, writing! The ...

This is very nice indeed! I am most certainly going to read your novel after reading this, that's what I'll say. So, onto the writing. There are a few little ...

Hey there! I'm here for a review for youuu! :P I really enjoyed reading this poem, it was beautiful and really full of emotion and brilliant :') Right, onto the ...

Hello there, this was interesting to read but I do have a few suggestions. I suggest that you do spell things right, I mean, I get your point with the ...

I think that this is about sunset, am I correct? This made the reader think for sure, but I think that your punctuation made it a little difficult to understand. ...

This. Is. Amazing. How have I not followed you?! *clicks follow* Right, so a short and excellent poem here, only five lines long and holds so much... power! :D I ...

This seriously has to be on the Spotlight. (I apologise for stupid typos I am on a hand held device. Right, onto the poem! Brilliant words and imagery that you ...

Oh my- That last line... jeez. That must have been a terrifying nightmare.. This is most certainly a piece of work you could take further and develop, as I'd personally ...

Well, to have written this, you are pretty darn talented. :P But this is a great piece of work. Short, to the point, and brilliant. It reminds me of a ...