Well, to have written this, you are pretty darn talented.
But this is a great piece of work. Short, to the point, and brilliant.
It reminds me of a quote actually:
"If I had remained invisible, the truth would stay hidden. I couldn't allow that."
But onto the work!
I can see zero errors in the punctuation and grammar so thumbs up on that.
Like Laure said, this is a dark piece, and you've done what most writers wouldn't do which makes this piece totally stand out of the crowd.
This piece is really nice, so I have come to the conclusion during this review that I shall follow you! As it is well deserved.
I apologise for no criticism too, I can't find anything wrong!
-CFG
Points: 1810
Reviews: 183
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