ChocolateCello

Hey! Cello here! I must admit, it took me a second read over to get a hang of the perspectives, but once I got it, everything seemed 10x more meaningful ...

Hey! Cello here! Let's just jump in. I have an obsession with H2O and the rejection of moral principles, also getting older and drowning. I don't like 'also'. It throws ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! First off, I would scratch the italics. It takes away from the meaning and the words. Second, the word 'illuminate' feels wrong. Usually ...

Hey! Cello here! I really liked this. You used a beautiful vocabulary and none of your words felt forced. It all flowed, feeling comfortable and natural, and telling a beautiful ...

Hey! Cello here! This review will be rather short as this poem is rather short. You used a beautiful vocabulary and put a lot of meaning into your words. One ...

Hey! Cello here for a review! This was a cute story and you did a great job with the script set up. I could just imagine this as a short ...

Hey! Cello here! I read another poem of yours and you've really proven to be a skilled writer. You take such simply concepts and gave them such great meaning. You're ...

Hey! Cello here! I always love your poem so I was excited to see this. This had a really creative story in it and all the rhymes rolled smoothly and ...

Hey! Cello here! This was a really sweet poem. I have a few suggestions though- She never found her dream job, But she found true love. she sent her man ...

Hey! Cello here! It was really nice to read this little burt of positivity. I have to question you're beat and flow though. It felt... choppy. A few minor edits ...

Hey! Cello here! This review will be short for the poem was only sixteen lines long. It was a really interesting concept and I'd love to see you expand on ...

Hey! Cello here! Wow, that was interesting. This is an amazing start to a story. You did a great job at developing characters and really got the plot rolling. Some ...

Hey! Cello here! This review will be short as the poem's only 18 words long. First off, I'd like to say that I enjoyed the bitterness mixed with the comedy. ...

Hey! Cello here! Very interesting poem. Well written, too. One thing I would change though- Make the poem self inclusive. Pretend you live in Syria. 'Our country is falling in ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! I really liked the poem, it was cute, but I feel like the bold took away. This poem is a simple idea but ...