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HEYYYY CELLO HERE! Sorry, a bit energetic right now. Amazing poem. You had beautiful language and conveyed a great story/lesson/meaning. I'm horrible at praising things but I loved this. On ...

Hey! Cello here! OKAY SO LIKE WOW- I saw the other 'I am' poem and was not impressed. It was simple, plain, a bit jumbled. This was meaningful. So many ...

Hey! Cello here! I really loved the message here and I agree with everything stated. It's a wonderful lesson you're trying to convey but I think there are a few ...

Hey! Cello here! I'll be avoiding content for the most part as I'm not the most religious person so I don't feel that's it fair for me to edit your ...

Hey! Cello here! Interesting story. it was very creative and you had some beautiful rhymes though I'm not quite sure what to make of the ending. I won't be editing ...

Hey! Cello here! Okay, (Like sherri) I'm agreeing with clogs on this one. In my mind this is less of a poem and more of an 'Instagram photo with a ...

Hey! Cello here! (On a mobile so forgive me grammer and spelling) Okay, all for the poem, it's great, but the puncuation make me cringe. You choose freely (with no ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! This is a wonderful concept- coincidently one I have been thinking about a ton over the past few weeks. 'Time is but a ...

Cello here! Cute- thing? It's not a poem or a story so I don't know how to refer to it. 'Cute work' There we are. The procrastination came across loud ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! Loved this poem! I'm horrible when it comes to praising (I can't put my appreciation into words) so I'm going to jump straight ...

Hey! Cello here! I saw this was under 'lyrics'. I really love the words and I super curious as to how it would sound to music. A few suggestions- Add ...

Hey! Cello here for a review! I'm going to be focusing mainly on minor errors instead of content, as your story is very long and would require a very long ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! Happy review day! I really liked this poem. Each word carried great meaning and everything flowed calmly. There's not a lot I can ...

Hey! Cello here! Great poem! You told an amazing story. A few minor suggestions though- above the hollering echoes of hell I get it, not punctuation, but if you're skipping ...

Hey! Cello here! Not sure what 'the power of imagination' is, a book, some sort of bandwagon, or just the simple concept of imagination, but I'll review anyway. I would ...