ChocoCookie

Hi! So, I would like to say I enjoyed reading the poem. I found it very sweet, loving and it reminded me of my own mother. My mother is the ...

Hey Harshita! I loved how you started this off. It was a little sad, dark and it doesn't leave the reader with confusion. In fact, it gives us an exact ...

Lylas, I love the poem! It has a good romantic feeling in it. But I think you need to work on punctuation a bit more and rephrasing it. About: 1. ...

Yubbies, Good poem but I think you're missing something here. "Sound of tears" sound a little optimistic and since we're not wanting to hear the tears, the poem tells us ...

Dear MaKreige, What a wonderful poem you've got here! Keep up the good work! I think you've definitely got this on my favourite list. And also, Welcome to YWS! I ...

Hey Lily! I think your poem was a very fun-to-read, exciting and fresh poem. So good job! About the Poem: 1. I think what you need to work is "full-stops" ...

Dear LadyPurple, I felt this story had its own little meaning and message to give forward to the reader which was good. I understood the concept pretty much. And it ...

FG508, I considered your poem to be fast-moving and up-to-point. Which I must say, you have done a good job but from what I have observed is, there are lots ...

Macy! *grin* (

Ember (: I loved it. You're a really good writer and I don't think I found any mistakes that I have to point out. Great work done! Keep Writing!~ ChocoCookie

Vyper! ^^ First reviewer! YES! xD Eh-Let's get back. First off, hands down. You're an awesome writer! Second, I love the rhyming that comes in between of every stanza. That's ...

Starlit (: Actually, I found your story quite inquisitive, but what I would say is, the story only gives our the girl's emotions and moods. Not that its really wrong, ...

Misspurplegirl, Maybe this isn't supposed to be under the "poem" category because it sort of looks like a Article. But its a nice little piece. Their full of questions and ...

Nargles, I found this poem very true, touching and very nicely written. The way you describe each circumstance or in other words, examples, is a positive point here. I thoroughly ...

Hi Poemlovr! So, I'm just going to go through a small review since I'm on a reviewing spree. I found this poem a little tacky (in the sense, a sort ...