Hey there!
I'm more here to tell you how much I liked rather than review it. Besides the misspelling of apologizing in the first line, I think your grammar and spelling were pretty well done. At least from a novel writers point of view, I was under the impression poets had more creative freedom, so forgive me if I'm forgetting to point out something blatantly obvious.
As for content, I loved the poem. It felt like a direct narration of something straight out of real life. Maybe this is a personal opinion, but that's my favorite type of writing, when the writer is able to pass their emotions to the reader through their writing. It shows that they really put feeling into their writing.
And I loved that touch at the end, the 'Yours His Truly' bit. Yeah, I really liked that
Your a great writer, and poet, so keep up the good work
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