Charm

Hey I'm here to review your work :) Grammar: I stared at the white paper, r ed marks strewn all across it. Letters, numbers, and the crimson colored ink t ...

Hey I'm here to review your work :) Grammar: I love you so dearly, y ou are a kiss to my heart. My best friend, my first love, w e ...

So beautiful, its eyes looking at you seeing everything inside you like none have before. It's blue wonder, it's light (blue wonder? blue, wonder?) the sun kissed clouds in the ...

Hey I'm here to review your work! I look up at the Sky (I don't like how sky is capitalized. I don't really see the point. It's not like it's ...

Hey! I really related to this work even though I have never been diagnosed with depression. I've definitely felt extremely sad for pretty much a whole year. I think this ...

Hey! Here to review your work. This is my first review in a loooong time. "It started like every other day I woke up did my chores went to school ...

Hey! I got to the Christian school though I'm not religious. If anything I live my life because I don't like arguing with people whether something is real or not. ...

Hey! I really really reaaaallllyy liked this poem but I do see room for improvement. First I wanted to compliment your work. I really love this metaphor and it just ...

Hey I'm here to review your poem! It was there under the lemon tree, that the boy soon learned of the fate and frustration that the sun seem to throw. ...

Just a quick review: I love the title and I love the poem but there were a few moments that felt awkward. For example: "never getting any better never any ...

Hey I'm here to review your poem. Grammar It's hard. Everything. And what I think is everything , Everyone everyone thinks it's is nothing. It's hard to be happy all ...

Oh! I like this :3 Here's my review. I hope it's helpful :D She sits under the maple tree, hair short and choppy, clothes faded and worn . commas needs ...

Hey I'm here to review your poem :3 Immediately I noticed your poems main issues, long lines, no stanzas, and incorrect punctuation. So I'm going to correct it for you ...

Hey, just here to write a short review for your cute little poem :3 I really enjoyed it. I found the rhyme was simple and not forced at all (which ...

Hey! Here to review your lyrics. I really liked this. I felt like the rhyme and flow was really good. I'd love to hear you sing this. I would have ...