Hello there! DeepRoses here to give a review!
I really love this poem. It signifies your true love for your boyfriend and its truly adorable. I relate very much, for as i love my boyfriend just as much. The words you used were simplistic and not hard to understand but maybe next time you could try and use a larger spam of vocabulary.
When you skip each line, it automatically capitalizes, but maybe instead of letting it capitalize each line maybe start off the line (if it isn't starting a sentence) lower casing it.
Also what I have just learned today as I was writing more poems, I decided to divide my poem up into stanzas, which will make it easier to read and to review
Otherwise, i love this adorable lovely poem! I'm glad to see you used personal or real life experiences/people to inspire you to write. It is always fun to write about something or someone because it makes it much easier to think of what to write, especially when expressing your feelings through your topic
Keep up the good work!
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