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Re: Raindrops !
Hello! Although this poem is good, I am having trouble reading and understanding it. Your use of quotes is a turn-off, it doesn't really work. I've read it a couple ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Old Yellow Shed
Hello, Are you seriously ten years old? If so, a round of applause is in order for how well you write. I came across this and my first thought was, ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: What Happened to Me?
Hello! I would say good day, but I see it is not. Oh you poor dear, for in reading your tales of woe my heart goes out to you. Everyone ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: If I Could Die For You
Hello and Good.. whatever time of day it is for you :D When I saw this poem and it's description, I thought it would be something else... And maybe a ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Society's Mind: Off of my Chest
Oh hello, I was just scrolling through the Green Room when I saw this. It has been here far to long, how 'bout we do something about that, shall we? ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: hold on
Hello! That was emotional. I mean, I read this out loud and it had so much feeling, I really loved it. I seemed a little sad, a little depressed, a ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: The wooden box- chapter one
Radiant how could you.... You took all my edits I had noted and addressed them :p Oh well, good job... The whole story was very interesting, and if you added ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Caterpillar
Good morning Weirdo. Usually that is not how I prefer to address people for the first time, but your name forced me to do it :D Your story is good. ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Once you let me go
Wow, this is really sad. Normally I would have a lot of things to say, and a bunch of nitpicks, but I can't do that to this story. You did ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: if i jumped off a cliff you would do it too
Wow, this is a pretty interesting piece. I'm not sure whether or not I actually like it. You did a great job addressing a big thing in a lot of ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: By Its Cover
Hello, the names Autopilot and I'm going to review your work. To begin with, the title and description drew me in; we all here the phrase 'Don't judge a book ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: These Thoughts of Mine
Hello, good morning Death Boy. So, you have submitted your first poem, I am so proud of you Hermana pequena! To begin with, your format is great, this is easy ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Tick Tock
Good day to you! To begin with, I've read this a few times and I still find it interesting. The concept of the whole thing is good; the whole 'staying ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Donuts? I love donuts!
Hello, Red here for a review! To begin with, this story was great; I enjoyed this immensely and cannot wait to read more by you. I feel that even a ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: Barbie Dolls
Salutations friend. In reading this I am actually assaulted with a wide array of emotions. To begin with, this is really well written, and the ideas presented in it make ...
Mar 30, 2016
