Ashkitten83

Hello, Ashkitten here for a review. First off, i love pirates, and the pirate imagery you gave was definitely very vivid. I loved the way you played with words. For ...

Hello, Ashkitten here for a review. First I'm going to go over the things that I feel need improvement and then I will follow up by telling you all the ...

Forgive me, but I feel like I read the first chapter which was magnificent....and then I skipped chapters 2-15 and read the ending of the whole story. I read the ...

The only thing I would do is separate the emails with more space in between so that it's easier to follow. Even if you put a dashed line between them, ...

I enjoyed this piece immensely. I don't have any critiques that haven't already been said, so I am going to tell you what I liked. It reminded me of the ...

Hello, Ashkitten here, ready to review your work. For this being your first serious poem I will say, congratulations on stepping out and trying something new. Serious suits you. You ...

Hello, I'm Ashkitten and I'm here to review this piece. I will talk about the stuff that I think needs improvement first and then I will go on to say ...

Hello, I'm Ashkitten and I'm here to review your short story. I'm going to start off by telling you what I think needs improvement and then I will talk about ...

Hello I'm Ashkitten and I will be conducting a review for you on this piece today. I will start off by telling you what I think needs improving, and then ...

Hello I'm Ashkitten and I will be reviewing your poem. First I'm going to talk about what I felt like needs improving and then I will talk about what I ...

Hello, I'm Ashkitten and I'm here to give your poem a review. I'm going to hit you with the stuff I think needs improving first, and then I will tell ...

I'm Ashkitten and I'm here to critique this piece for a review. First thing I want to say is...What a fantastic way to portray depression. I myself have had bouts ...

Platonic means just friends. I don't think this word belongs in the story. I sense that the narrator has real feelings for this girl. Be careful what words you use ...

I like this. I feel your imagery is wonderful. I felt her anger, sadness, confusion, hopelessness as it was portrayed. I would only say that this read as more of ...

I do like it. I feel like you chose a few words out of context. I felt a connection to it and then a sudden disconnect when those words were ...