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Re: Us
Just like KFdreamer, I don't know how to draw hands at all but, I would like to give you some advise. You drew this from a great angle and I ...
Jan 20, 2017 -
Re: Favorite Childhood Memories; Wait I'm Invisible?
Hello, I am very happy that you have chosen to post your free writes. I also like the fact that you do free writes. They are a great way to ...
Jan 20, 2017 -
Re: Dear mum........
Hi man, I'm just here to talk about the vibes that this piece gave me. I really enjoyed this work, I was very surprised by the way it ended. When ...
Jan 19, 2017 -
Re: want
This is an amazing poem. I am sure you got a good grade. There are a few things you need to work on though. You had a lot of grammar ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: Suddenly poetry in boredom..and stress
This is a good poem and it really captures the frustration that all students go through when state testing time rolls around. I am sure that you will do good. ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Good Enough, I suppose
This is a really good poem. Thank you for posting it on here. I am here to give a positive review, not a constructive one because I have foud nothing ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Deaf, Blind Love- Preface
Awww I love this! It is sad that not a lot of people have seen this.This is a really good preface that made me really think about what love really ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Funeral Music
This is a fairly nice poem, you get your point across and your words flow. I love the poem!!! I would try to add more descriptive words, I kind of ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Grow Down
This is a very good poem. It is short and has a nice story line. I would definitely read more of it if you wrote more. I feel like you ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: A beautiful love story...
This was a beautiful story. I feel like it helps show people what love really is. The short itself was written beautifully. I also think this piece can speak to ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: You Failed
This poem is beautiful and relatable. I feel like this poem is out of experience. You did a good job of giving the reader the message. I like how you ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: x - warnings
This is a piece of nicely written poetry. I feel like you put a lot of thought into it, while I was reading it I was thinking about what you ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: Smile
This poem is amazing. I can relate to it myself. I like the way you wrote it. I feel like maybe you could change a few things though ( not ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: daddy's girl
This was a very nice poem. It flows well and I think many people can relate to it. When I read your poem, I could feel your emotion. It was ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: A Woman of Beauty
This is an amazing poem.. I have some advice tho. If this poem is for a novel that you are writing I might make it a tad bit longer. Maybe ...
Mar 10, 2016
