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Hello hello I hope you dont mind me popping in with a quick review. I wonder what happened to cause this mistrust of chickens whatever it was fuelled quite a ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this started out fairly normal there but ...

Cyrin checked the fill line on the watering can-- still plenty left. Which still wasn't nearly enough for the forest of plants in Lyall's room. Seriously, the man had it ...

i love myself or maybe one day i will

more screaming but make it cottagecore

interlude inspired

i love butterflies and metaphors

screaming

Hello Stranger! ~ Writing Commentary Oooo, interesting first chapter! I can only wonder what this story will be like continuing forward. It seems there is a mysterious ghostlike figure stealing ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Woah! This chapter certainly had a lot of great moments! Josephine watched with teary eyes as thunder cracked outside of the shed, causing her to ...

Hi, I'm Swifite13 and I'm reviewing your work today. First of all, I liked this story even though I didn't understand it all the way. What was the point of ...

A Prolouge for my new story! :)

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase knew that she was more than just a wise deity. Jase knew that there was some sort of resilience and savagery that stayed cloaked ...

Hey, KaeRae here! Just wanted to review your story while I was reading it. First of all, I don't have a fear of chickens, but the way you described them ...

else i am to cry i think you should tear my tears away

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary The healers, thank gods, were able to successfully remove all roots and growths from her brain, only leaving a few in Persephone’s lungs. Good to ...