Wow! I absolutely loved and connected to the previous version, but this one really hit me. The conclusion to this work can honestly be ouch to read, especially when your ...

This is a revised version of the poem I wrote, Mirror. I've added 2 new stanzas so it finally feels finished.

Hey there, Eilís here with a short lil' review. To start off, I really like this piece. I was unsure how I would feel about it at first, but it ...

Not what I was expecting- BUT YOU ABSOLUTELY BLEWWWWWWWW MEEEEE AWAYYYYYY! This is fantastic. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love how bold your first sentence is. That ...

This is a very strong poem with lots of raw emotion like you said. I'm unsure if you chose to do this on purpose but I like how you have ...

This is absolutely amazing!!!! Thank you so much for sharing. I really joyed reading your poem!! What I especially love is that this poem could be taken so many different ...

TW Implied Suicide This was a wonderful poem. There was a lot of evoked emotion but in a somewhat subdued way. Destroyed by the stroke of a knife I like ...

Implied suicide. You gave us a fair warning at the beginning. This poem possess al lot of Pathos and vulnerability but also a sense of uniformity. You repeat the phrase ...

Hi mordax, Mailice again here with a short review! :D The first half of the chapter could be summed up as a panicked family outing where siblings Ren and Rieka ...

Awesome posts everyone!! The snacks these characters are bringing sound delicious =D Also, question for you all: do you think the ~magic event~ should happen before, during, or after the ...

Onward then! No time to celebrate this muted victory, there is still a whole prophecy to complete.

They have the sword, but victory feels mute... Now what?

Hi RandomTalks, Mailice here with a short review! :D I liked reading your introduction. You got off to a very dynamic start here, and with a new sentence structure and ...

Hey there! Mordax here for a review. Just a heads up, I have not read any of your previous chapters, so if I misunderstand anything, just ignore me, lol Let's ...

Hi HarryHardy, Mailice here with a short review! :D I felt the chapter was written in a different style than the previous one. It lacked a bit of humour and ...

@whatchamacallit (funny I didn't know that. . .) Thanks! I've never written fantasy, but I've been working on a few sci-fis. (have you read Ignite by Jenna Terese?) My main ...