This is a good start to a novel, but I feel like everything is moving too fast. You don't spend enough time on anything for it to really make an ...

Hi! I really liked this piece, and the last chapter I read from this series was, I think, 41.2. I guess I'll put this on my To Read list so ...

Whats this? Cyber_Cs? The amazing Cyber? You bet! And i am here with a review thats not really a review. I liked how you did your reaserch. It must have ...

This chapter was chilling. To start off with that romantic, sensual scene and then move onto Claire overhearing Jay tell something that kind of sounded like a threat…well it sent ...

Another great chapter! It was engaging, with great characters and description and you SPaG is great too. As soon as this chapter started I was hooked. Debbie said “It’s happening!” ...

I think this poem has the start of nice imagery, but it doesn't really develop into a narrative at all. I'm intrigued by the line "Who would have thought that ...

Hi Elinor, I was going through the green room and saw that the next two chapters of this story were still there so I decided to start at the beginning ...

I have not read anything else in the story yet but I will have to. Ill admit when I started this I wasnt expecting to enjoy it. I have a ...

I have not read the rest of the chapters, so all I am Reviewing is this part alone. To start off Im not a fan of this tense. I just ...

Hey! Although this is an old post, I thought I'd review it anyway, mainly because I was shocked at how much I actually enjoyed it. At face value, it doesn't ...

I like this! The premise is intriguing, to say the least. I think you've got the idea of a good plot down, so I'm going to focus on the writing ...

Okay, this first paragraph about Isha's perspective on Gideon is absolutely hilarious and perfectly sassy. Admittedly, I didn't expect this chapter to start after Gideon left since so much time ...

An interesting poem! I like the contrast you try to bring between how bad we feel when we're sick and how we take health for granted. Pairing that with the ...

What an incredible title! The first part of the extract was what really pulled me in. It's a very well-done image that you've produced. I think it could be cool ...

Hi! Happy review day I like the extract, it's actually one of the more well-written pieces I've read on here. You have good understanding of pacing, plot, and description -- ...