Good day to you, Pernicus. This poem you have written isn't a very common one to come across in that there is a riddle involved within the rhymes. I'm not ...

Woot woot! Nit-picks and nice moments: "It is horrid," she whispered, casting her eyes to the ground. I forget if I've said this before or not but I think you ...

Hey there, Luata here for a review. As it is pretty much first thing in the morning and I'm still sort of groggy, bear with me if my review begins ...

Hey screamingsloth! I must say well done! The poem really brings out the essence of thrill,suspense and fear while maintaining its rhythm and flow. At points it may seem slightly ...

1. Thoughts on Liz. Her personality. her motivations. her angst. (too much?) her choices. likable enough? did you root for her? TOO MUCH ANGST, YES. Sometimes I just wanted to ...

Her mom is going to have a heart attack. Like, she *just* woke up. Maybe they should give Logan and/or the nurses some time to prepare her for the fact ...

Ascension: Thørn 18 (The Myriad book 1) by Feltrix Specifics 1. Are the rooms they are being led to still in this underground part where the prisoners are being kept ...

Hello, marms! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

Hello, myjaspercat. I am going to start off with criticism then work my way into compliments or positive thoughts. Huge wall of text here: I don't even like cats y ...

Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. I had a good laugh after reading this story. It was superb and kind of realistic. Okay, now coming to the ...

Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. First of all, this essay is simply AMAZING. I am sure that every teenager, which includes me, can relate to it. ...

Hey there screamingsloth! Great job on the poem! I really liked being able to visualize everything as it unfolded. I felt that it was fast paced, but for the topic ...

I just read your poem and...WOW!!! I mean, I had to read it thrice and each time, I was speechless. How can you be so perfect? The words, the punctuations, ...

This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. Welcome to YWS, luhman! If you ever have any questions, don't be afraid to ask me or any other names in ...

Hey ThisisLegacy, This poem is SO much clearer than "Attack" with what it's talking about. Like, I'm still not 100% on all of the details, but the meaning behind the ...