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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Dramatic
    Bound by Blood

    This is a good start to a novel, but I feel like everything is moving too fast. You don't spend enough time on anything for it to really make an ...

    GreatBlueDane
    GreatBlueDane - 48 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    The Hero's Brother (39.2)

    Hi! I really liked this piece, and the last chapter I read from this series was, I think, 41.2. I guess I'll put this on my To Read list so ...

    Miraculor77
    Miraculor77 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Article / Essay » Review, Fanfiction
    What Hogwarts House Most Popular Among Potterheads?

    Whats this? Cyber_Cs? The amazing Cyber? You bet! And i am here with a review thats not really a review. I liked how you did your reaserch. It must have ...

    Cyber_Cs
    Cyber_Cs - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction
    Earth to the Moon (3)

    This chapter was chilling. To start off with that romantic, sensual scene and then move onto Claire overhearing Jay tell something that kind of sounded like a threat…well it sent ...

    DottieSnark
    DottieSnark - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction
    Earth to the Moon (2)

    Another great chapter! It was engaging, with great characters and description and you SPaG is great too. As soon as this chapter started I was hooked. Debbie said “It’s happening!” ...

    DottieSnark
    DottieSnark - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Fly me

    I think this poem has the start of nice imagery, but it doesn't really develop into a narrative at all. I'm intrigued by the line "Who would have thought that ...

    alliyah
    alliyah - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction
    Earth to the Moon (1)

    Hi Elinor, I was going through the green room and saw that the next two chapters of this story were still there so I decided to start at the beginning ...

    DottieSnark
    DottieSnark - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural
    Apocalypse Then Part 3

    I have not read anything else in the story yet but I will have to. Ill admit when I started this I wasnt expecting to enjoy it. I have a ...

    Zrillis
    Zrillis - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Technology
    Chapter 9: Tunnel

    I have not read the rest of the chapters, so all I am Reviewing is this part alone. To start off Im not a fan of this tense. I just ...

    Zrillis
    Zrillis - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative
    Hypochondriac Chapter 4

    Hey! Although this is an old post, I thought I'd review it anyway, mainly because I was shocked at how much I actually enjoyed it. At face value, it doesn't ...

    Asith
    Asith - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic
    Finding Destiny (Chapter 13)

    I like this! The premise is intriguing, to say the least. I think you've got the idea of a good plot down, so I'm going to focus on the writing ...

    Asith
    Asith - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    The Hero's Brother (23.1)

    Okay, this first paragraph about Isha's perspective on Gideon is absolutely hilarious and perfectly sassy. Admittedly, I didn't expect this chapter to start after Gideon left since so much time ...

    JabberHut
    JabberHut - 14 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    Fever

    An interesting poem! I like the contrast you try to bring between how bad we feel when we're sick and how we take health for granted. Pairing that with the ...

    Asith
    Asith - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    The Mind and Those Who Visit 2

    What an incredible title! The first part of the extract was what really pulled me in. It's a very well-done image that you've produced. I think it could be cool ...

    Asith
    Asith - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Soul Cutters Chapter 14

    Hi! Happy review day I like the extract, it's actually one of the more well-written pieces I've read on here. You have good understanding of pacing, plot, and description -- ...

    Asith
    Asith - 16 hours ago


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