I'm excited that your second part is out. Good work. You did well working the emotion into the story. Experiment with more creative words to make it even more colorful ...

Not bad for a first poem. You've taken on a task that I don't see accomplished much in actually writing a rhyming poem. Some of your words are creative. However, ...

First of all can I just say I am in literal love with your title!!!!!!!!!! I am writing a book that is based on the stars and I.... I don't ...

Already you have built this very visual fantasy world. I loved how you talked about magic like it's a life force. Here you said: She'd heard them arguing for a ...

Hello there, lindzwrites! Dreamy here to give a short review. This is wonderfully written. I got really into it. It was interesting and made me very curious about this Mademoiselle. ...

Hi! First off, I love this poem. The rhythm is great and I'm always impressed when people can figure out rhymes such as these. There's just one stanza in particular ...

UH. UH. ALANNA? WHY ALANNA? Because she's young or is sHE SPECIAL?? WHY ALANNA? Okay, FIRST OF ALL. Ember is adorable and I love her already. She is spunky, I ...

Hey Brianna! I'm here to review your poem! There's a lot of good imagery here! You do a very good job painting a visual picture of what's going on without ...

Hello, Annie here to leave you with a short review! First of all, I really enjoy this poem. To see relationships with people as something that is delicate like a ...

Hiya Vent! Sorry it's taken a few days for me to get to this. Small Comments Instinctively, she tightens her grip on her backpack straps. “Hello?” she calls. If Ming ...

Hello Alliyah This is an amazing story. It describes how the person is feeling and how they like to follow the map that's written in front of them and not ...

Hey Carlito! Quick disclaimer: I haven't read the rest of When I Was Anna, so this review may not be as helpful as I don't want to assume too much. ...

Wow! This prologue really had me going. First of all I wanted to see that I absolutely love the romance you had going in between the two characters at the ...

Hey Lionhero333! Kudos to you for writing such a long piece! Just a few grammar things to note. First, dialogue grammar! Comma goes inside the quotation marks and there's no ...

Ok, the blank message was an accident. Lol :) This is a deep subject and I like how you've written it. You've delved into a subject that many people are ...