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I Feel Guilty
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i., ii., iii.
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  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, General
    What a Wonderful World--REVISED

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. I saw that a few people didn’t like your poem very much down in the comments, but I think it’s awesome! I ...

    VioletFantasy
    VioletFantasy - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 5

    Hello, there. Thanks for requesting a review from my thread, and so let's go through this chapter. I see that the main view point in this section is Terry, so ...

    EditorAndPerks
    EditorAndPerks - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    The Devil Inside Of My Head

    'Ello, Axiom here for a review. I like the language used (e.g. hair that was probably disorganized by the wind, foundation stings), and the whole backstory, which is tragic. Although, ...

    Axiom
    Axiom - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Part 1 - LA

    Grammar 1. Well, maybe he takes everything back. incorrect tense. should be "took everything back." 2. she said with a sigh before taking hold of his cauldron and working on ...

    BlackThorne
    BlackThorne - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic
    Bombay Dreams

    Grammar 1. IIT-B has been the dream of every JEE aspirant ever since it was established and the city is one of the reasons for it. needs a comma between ...

    BlackThorne
    BlackThorne - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense
    The Price of a Soul [Chapter 2.1]

    Hiii back to review!! Your posts keep on reminding me or else I wouldn't be here, tbh. :P Alright, sooo this chapter was great and I didn't really notice any ...

    Liberty
    Liberty - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Fantasy, Literature
    The sun and moon

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review and welcome you to YWS! If you ever have questions or need anything else, feel free to contact me! Now, onto the ...

    VioletFantasy
    VioletFantasy - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, General
    Fly By Night

    Hello IamI! This was a bit long for my short attention span, but I still really enjoyed the concept. It reminded me of memories at the airport late at night ...

    Cici
    Cici - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, Other
    feelings of music

    Dear MoonIris, I know exactly how you feel. Music is my whole life, so this poem really speaks to me. I only found a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but ...

    ImaginaryPoet
    ImaginaryPoet - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Pit Fall

    Dear MeherazulAzim16, Hello! I really liked this poem, and the metaphor behind it of falling in love being a dark pit that you get sucked into. I do have a ...

    ImaginaryPoet
    ImaginaryPoet - 12 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Conquest of Shadows Prologue

    Hi Flames, I'm here for a review! You've definitely set up a great atmosphere in the first part of the prologue - I can feel how loud the battle would ...

    whatchamacallit
    whatchamacallit - 14 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General
    Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter Four)

    Yay, another chapter! :D I think this has to be my favourite chapter so far because not of it felt rushed; it was mainly backstory and emotions, and I really ...

    starlitmind
    starlitmind - 14 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Other, General
    Yangtze Home

    Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. This is a really cool poem. It’s the perfect length in my opinion. It’s long enough to have a good amount of ...

    VioletFantasy
    VioletFantasy - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense
    The Price of a Soul [Prologue]

    Hey! I saw you've uploaded another chapter so I thought I'd go back to the beginning. The first chapter is a bit jarring. She says she's running and she's fearful ...

    MissGangamash
    MissGangamash - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Science Fiction, General
    Space, Time and Nuclear War - Complete Short Story

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm Knight Hardy here on a mission to ensure that all works on YWS has at least two ...

    HarryHardy
    HarryHardy - 17 hours ago


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