Aha! It seems I have stumbled across a YWS classic that I am just now having the chance to read! :) And perfect timing since I need to review a ...

Hi there, whatcha! I interpreted this fascinating piece of yours along the lines of emotions. It's almost as though the speaker's feelings are inconsistent, and they are fumbling to adjust ...

Hey there! I think I might review your story slightly more often. I’m always doing at least one part a day, but every once in a while I might try ...

Aha! I am here to review. Also you know that I'm always going to love a good color poem, so you've already got my heart with the subject matter. So ...

I love this idea with my entire heart. Reminds me of a sciency graph poem fortis did that I've always admired. Okay so on to the VERY LATE review!! :) ...

Hi ducklin! Sorry it took me so long to get back to this ^^ I wanted to make sure I had enough time to leave a good review. First of ...

Hi there CC279! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions about it as you're getting settled in, I'd be glad ...

Here to review another of the wonderful soundofmind's chapters! :) Before he could get any more concrete answers James was forced to eat, which he took as a personal offense, ...

Yoooo! I really love this! I think this is super good. I personally am not very good at writing but I think you did a great job. I like the ...

Hi! Spunky here to review! Whether it be because of murder, accidents, or illness, a woman who still holds her enthusiasm and love for Apsara dancing would carry it with ...

Hello, I thought I'd stop by and give you a review today. You seem to have a fairly good grasp of writing descriptions and scenes, which is a good thing! ...

hey sound! WOW I'VE GOT SOME CATCHING UP TO DO forgive me if I have forgotten things, hopefully I'll be able to finish in a timely manner (probably not though ...

Momo is here to review this wonderful start to what will be a very interesting book!! I love this!!!! It's so intriguing, and I love the mystery of it! I ...

This was really cool! This definitely seems like a story that could be elaborated on, even stretched over an entire novel. The mystery and suspense were great, but because it ...