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Holi Day
by ForeverYoung299 in Poetry » Culture


You’re gone
by SpunkyKitty in Poetry » Realistic


Survival: The Escape, Chapter 1.2
by HarryHardy in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


Why sad poems?
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my pumpkin patch
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  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    the only thing between drowning and suffocating is the air

    Not what I was expecting- BUT YOU ABSOLUTELY BLEWWWWWWWW MEEEEE AWAYYYYYY! This is fantastic. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love how bold your first sentence is. That ...

    AilahEvelynMae
    AilahEvelynMae - 1 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    It hurts; I don't care

    This is a very strong poem with lots of raw emotion like you said. I'm unsure if you chose to do this on purpose but I like how you have ...

    eilisBK
    eilisBK - 2 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Horror, Realistic
    A bit too exhausted; No more, it cries

    This is absolutely amazing!!!! Thank you so much for sharing. I really joyed reading your poem!! What I especially love is that this poem could be taken so many different ...

    AilahEvelynMae
    AilahEvelynMae - 5 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    You’re gone

    TW Implied Suicide This was a wonderful poem. There was a lot of evoked emotion but in a somewhat subdued way. Destroyed by the stroke of a knife I like ...

    eilisBK
    eilisBK - 6 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    You’re gone

    Implied suicide. You gave us a fair warning at the beginning. This poem possess al lot of Pathos and vulnerability but also a sense of uniformity. You repeat the phrase ...

    JohnKlue
    JohnKlue - 45 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 10]

    Hi mordax, Mailice again here with a short review! :D The first half of the chapter could be summed up as a panicked family outing where siblings Ren and Rieka ...

    MailicedeNamedy
    MailicedeNamedy - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » General, General
    The Old Man And The Boy 2

    Hi RandomTalks, Mailice here with a short review! :D I liked reading your introduction. You got off to a very dynamic start here, and with a new sentence structure and ...

    MailicedeNamedy
    MailicedeNamedy - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Eclipse: Chapter 7

    Hey there! Mordax here for a review. Just a heads up, I have not read any of your previous chapters, so if I misunderstand anything, just ignore me, lol Let's ...

    mordax
    mordax - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Survival: The Escape, Chapter 1.2

    Hi HarryHardy, Mailice here with a short review! :D I felt the chapter was written in a different style than the previous one. It lacked a bit of humour and ...

    MailicedeNamedy
    MailicedeNamedy - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    We only go as far as we walk

    I'm new to reviewing but Wow this was really good! We only go as far as we walk that's True and everyone goes different ways, some walk far, others are ...

    Hikari_hateke
    Hikari_hateke - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 9.2]

    Hi mordax, Mailice back with another review! :D I'm about to fall into your wonderful introduction. It's a very nice opening for the second part of the chapter and I ...

    MailicedeNamedy
    MailicedeNamedy - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 9.1]

    Hi mordax, Mailice here with a short review! I liked the first part where Kai and Ambrose were talking. I especially like that Kai elegantly knows how to calm Ambrose ...

    MailicedeNamedy
    MailicedeNamedy - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    We are [curios about it? Well then, click this!!!!!!!]

    Hi there, rida! The first lines of this poem caught my attention. Flamingos and lions don’t seem all that related to each other, so I was curious to read on. ...

    Liminality
    Liminality - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    We only go as far as we walk

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review! Let's get started: First off, I loved this poem! It was a lament to this lost relationship, and you conveyed this hopelessness well. ...

    mordax
    mordax - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Culture, Lyrical
    Holi Day

    Have a good day! I think I am a little too late for a review but anyway, I think I will just add this here. The blinding shots of colours ...

    The_Rebel_2007
    The_Rebel_2007 - 5 hours ago


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