Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. I saw that a few people didn’t like your poem very much down in the comments, but I think it’s awesome! I ...

Hello, there. Thanks for requesting a review from my thread, and so let's go through this chapter. I see that the main view point in this section is Terry, so ...

'Ello, Axiom here for a review. I like the language used (e.g. hair that was probably disorganized by the wind, foundation stings), and the whole backstory, which is tragic. Although, ...

Grammar 1. Well, maybe he takes everything back. incorrect tense. should be "took everything back." 2. she said with a sigh before taking hold of his cauldron and working on ...

Grammar 1. IIT-B has been the dream of every JEE aspirant ever since it was established and the city is one of the reasons for it. needs a comma between ...

Hiii back to review!! Your posts keep on reminding me or else I wouldn't be here, tbh. :P Alright, sooo this chapter was great and I didn't really notice any ...

Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review and welcome you to YWS! If you ever have questions or need anything else, feel free to contact me! Now, onto the ...

Hello IamI! This was a bit long for my short attention span, but I still really enjoyed the concept. It reminded me of memories at the airport late at night ...

Dear MoonIris, I know exactly how you feel. Music is my whole life, so this poem really speaks to me. I only found a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but ...

Dear MeherazulAzim16, Hello! I really liked this poem, and the metaphor behind it of falling in love being a dark pit that you get sucked into. I do have a ...

Hi Flames, I'm here for a review! You've definitely set up a great atmosphere in the first part of the prologue - I can feel how loud the battle would ...

Yay, another chapter! :D I think this has to be my favourite chapter so far because not of it felt rushed; it was mainly backstory and emotions, and I really ...

Hello! VioletFantasy here to give you a review. This is a really cool poem. It’s the perfect length in my opinion. It’s long enough to have a good amount of ...

Hey! I saw you've uploaded another chapter so I thought I'd go back to the beginning. The first chapter is a bit jarring. She says she's running and she's fearful ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm Knight Hardy here on a mission to ensure that all works on YWS has at least two ...