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where will you stay, where will you make your home
by alliyah in Poetry » Realistic


The Lost Dragon 19.1
by soundofmind in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


When I Was Anna - 21
by Carlito in Novel / Chapter » Romantic


The Fire (2)
by Liberty in Short Story » Dramatic


The Fire (1)
by Liberty in Short Story » General


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  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, General
    The Fire (2)

    I'm excited that your second part is out. Good work. You did well working the emotion into the story. Experiment with more creative words to make it even more colorful ...

    WinnyWriter
    WinnyWriter - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    Love is blooming

    Not bad for a first poem. You've taken on a task that I don't see accomplished much in actually writing a rhyming poem. Some of your words are creative. However, ...

    WinnyWriter
    WinnyWriter - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other
    Children with Stars in their Veins (Prologue)

    First of all can I just say I am in literal love with your title!!!!!!!!!! I am writing a book that is based on the stars and I.... I don't ...

    amara_rae_15
    amara_rae_15 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Ice & Magic - Chapter Two

    Already you have built this very visual fantasy world. I loved how you talked about magic like it's a life force. Here you said: She'd heard them arguing for a ...

    amara_rae_15
    amara_rae_15 - 7 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Literature, Romantic
    The City of Lone

    Hello there, lindzwrites! Dreamy here to give a short review. This is wonderfully written. I got really into it. It was interesting and made me very curious about this Mademoiselle. ...

    Dreamy
    Dreamy - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Friendship's Rose

    Hi! First off, I love this poem. The rhythm is great and I'm always impressed when people can figure out rhymes such as these. There's just one stanza in particular ...

    Flyingsquirrel42
    Flyingsquirrel42 - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other
    Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 2.1)

    UH. UH. ALANNA? WHY ALANNA? Because she's young or is sHE SPECIAL?? WHY ALANNA? Okay, FIRST OF ALL. Ember is adorable and I love her already. She is spunky, I ...

    JabberHut
    JabberHut - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Literature
    At Dawn

    Hey Brianna! I'm here to review your poem! There's a lot of good imagery here! You do a very good job painting a visual picture of what's going on without ...

    soundofmind
    soundofmind - 12 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Friendship's Rose

    Hello, Annie here to leave you with a short review! First of all, I really enjoy this poem. To see relationships with people as something that is delicate like a ...

    Anniepoo103
    Anniepoo103 - 13 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Earth Descended: 1.04

    Hiya Vent! Sorry it's taken a few days for me to get to this. Small Comments Instinctively, she tightens her grip on her backpack straps. “Hello?” she calls. If Ming ...

    Panikos
    Panikos - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, General
    where will you stay, where will you make your home

    Hello Alliyah This is an amazing story. It describes how the person is feeling and how they like to follow the map that's written in front of them and not ...

    Horselover1001
    Horselover1001 - 18 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » General, General
    When I Was Anna - 24

    Hey Carlito! Quick disclaimer: I haven't read the rest of When I Was Anna, so this review may not be as helpful as I don't want to assume too much. ...

    Flyingsquirrel42
    Flyingsquirrel42 - 23 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Prologue

    Wow! This prologue really had me going. First of all I wanted to see that I absolutely love the romance you had going in between the two characters at the ...

    amara_rae_15
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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Prologue

    Hey Lionhero333! Kudos to you for writing such a long piece! Just a few grammar things to note. First, dialogue grammar! Comma goes inside the quotation marks and there's no ...

    Flyingsquirrel42
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  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Would They Know?

    Ok, the blank message was an accident. Lol :) This is a deep subject and I like how you've written it. You've delved into a subject that many people are ...

    WinnyWriter
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