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Hiya there! I'm Orabella, here with (and unfortunately short) review. First of all, welcome to YWS! Hope you like it here. If you ever need anything, I'm here and so ...

I couldn't help but hop on another one! I won't be so long-winded this time. I noticed one case of a misused homophone, and like I said on your other ...

3- Things to Improve I noticed while I was reading your poem that there are some misused words. It's pretty common, and it's a really easy fix. you come with ...

1. What do you think of the imagery (mainly sensory descriptions like sight, sound, smell, etc.)? Are there any contrasting parts you notice? I found it very interesting how you ...

Hey there! Plume here, with a review! It's great to be back with Leilan and Kaja—I assume this means Mireya is with Dawn, which, big surprise there (not). It seems ...

I really like how this story turned out, with the good endings and all. I like the FNAF-like concept that their ghosts can only be freed with closure and the ...

Damn...Honestly, this kinda feels like a fever dream to me. I feel like this story kinda took the concept of Tantalus from Greek mythology and sprinkled some angst and real-world ...

Wow, cool story! I really like the idea of a princess who can hear the voices of flames and the mystery of her father's disappearance. I decided to start with ...

Well. Figured I should probably start somewhere on the reviews haha. Maybe I'll be caught up by the end of RevMo! I'll be honest in my first read through of ...

Hey there jadeactor! Icy here for a quick review this Friday :) For a first time writer, this was really well written! I'm going to kick off with a technical ...

I did not expect that ending. I wonder now if that really happened. Maybe it was just a dream…or when Jake “wakes up”, he actually goes into the afterlife. What ...

Salutations, curious mind! Rinisha here, ready to dive into the pages of this intriguing story. 📚! Buckle up, 'cause we're diving into my review magic! ✨ The Good Stuff: First ...

Hello Doss! In all honesty, I am writing this instead of paying attention to a rather boring class. It's a bit of a busy season for me and your poem ...

This is a pretty good story. There could be a little more elaboration on exactly how long this person has been in captivity. This appears to be a story about ...

I've never read this before, but it looks quite interesting, and I love dragons! Let's dive in. The good stuff: Your grammar is amazing! Never do I see someone who ...