Not what I was expecting- BUT YOU ABSOLUTELY BLEWWWWWWWW MEEEEE AWAYYYYYY! This is fantastic. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love how bold your first sentence is. That ...

This is a very strong poem with lots of raw emotion like you said. I'm unsure if you chose to do this on purpose but I like how you have ...

This is absolutely amazing!!!! Thank you so much for sharing. I really joyed reading your poem!! What I especially love is that this poem could be taken so many different ...

TW Implied Suicide This was a wonderful poem. There was a lot of evoked emotion but in a somewhat subdued way. Destroyed by the stroke of a knife I like ...

Implied suicide. You gave us a fair warning at the beginning. This poem possess al lot of Pathos and vulnerability but also a sense of uniformity. You repeat the phrase ...

Hi mordax, Mailice again here with a short review! :D The first half of the chapter could be summed up as a panicked family outing where siblings Ren and Rieka ...

Hi RandomTalks, Mailice here with a short review! :D I liked reading your introduction. You got off to a very dynamic start here, and with a new sentence structure and ...

Hey there! Mordax here for a review. Just a heads up, I have not read any of your previous chapters, so if I misunderstand anything, just ignore me, lol Let's ...

Hi HarryHardy, Mailice here with a short review! :D I felt the chapter was written in a different style than the previous one. It lacked a bit of humour and ...

I'm new to reviewing but Wow this was really good! We only go as far as we walk that's True and everyone goes different ways, some walk far, others are ...

Hi mordax, Mailice back with another review! :D I'm about to fall into your wonderful introduction. It's a very nice opening for the second part of the chapter and I ...

Hi mordax, Mailice here with a short review! I liked the first part where Kai and Ambrose were talking. I especially like that Kai elegantly knows how to calm Ambrose ...

Hi there, rida! The first lines of this poem caught my attention. Flamingos and lions don’t seem all that related to each other, so I was curious to read on. ...

Hey there, Mordax here for a review! Let's get started: First off, I loved this poem! It was a lament to this lost relationship, and you conveyed this hopelessness well. ...

Have a good day! I think I am a little too late for a review but anyway, I think I will just add this here. The blinding shots of colours ...