Absolutely love this. Especially the very last sentence - that was a great twist at the end there. Gave me a laugh. I do think the meter in this poem ...

This is a very nice story! I love the detail you put into it. One sentence that didn't quite feel right was the one "Her towel under her, [...] down ...

What a fun little poem! I enjoyed reading it. It reminded me a little of Velveteen Rabbit and Toy Story. I think the last line was one syllable too long, ...

That was amazing and well written! Now on to the review... "The creaking of the steps the coldness in the air a grim forewarning" - It needs commas. Try "The ...

Hey! Been busy, but I finally got to reading this! This is quite the monologue. This and part one together make the perfect diary of a confused, emotionally broken person ...

Good job! First two lines I think are the strongest and most well-written of the piece. The third line of the first stanza might need a little tweaking to help ...

I love this! I love the way you take the reader on a journey in the poem. It is really well written. There are a few points that are small ...

The missing apostrophe in the title was fairly intriguing - I was thinking perhaps this was a poem about how multiple dragons came together and formed one tear - I ...

It might just be me, but the "I'm in love with an inanimate object" poem style always makes me a wee bit uncomfortable - that being said, you do a ...

Hey there, CorruptedArrow! :D I like the picture painted with this story: two friends going on a camp trip. I love camping, so reading about these girls driving off into ...

Hey, Horison! I like the story! It was touching how she wanted to protect the egg, something beautiful and natural, and yet so dangerous. I like the way she found ...

Hey Pan! I'm back to (hopefully) finish catching up with these! Ah, it was so good to hear Dante's voice again. :D I agree with Blue that I'm not sure ...

Hi! I'm sorry for not reviewing this sooner, but it's just been a really busy week. I can do about 2-3 reviews per day, but today I started kind of ...

Write a poetry review where you use three different poetic devices to structure your review topics. Hello there Lightsong! Popping by to give you a review and boot you out ...

Hello there, thought I would pop by and give you a review on this work of yours. Starting off, I think that this is an interesting idea, especially in the ...