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Fog
by Lullaby in Poetry » Realistic


The Gentle Creatures
by Dossereana in Poetry » Chickens


Highway of Darkness
by OrabellaAvenue in Short Story » Dramatic


Missing Her ~ Ch: 4,5 & 6
by VioletSkies in Novel / Chapter » Realistic


The Last Spell 28.1
by SilverNight in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


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  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Fog

    Hiya there! I'm Orabella, here with (and unfortunately short) review. First of all, welcome to YWS! Hope you like it here. If you ever need anything, I'm here and so ...

    OrabellaAvenue
    OrabellaAvenue - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Chickens, General
    The Gentle Creatures

    I couldn't help but hop on another one! I won't be so long-winded this time. I noticed one case of a misused homophone, and like I said on your other ...

    AyumiGosu17
    AyumiGosu17 - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    My Final Goodbye

    3- Things to Improve I noticed while I was reading your poem that there are some misused words. It's pretty common, and it's a really easy fix. you come with ...

    AyumiGosu17
    AyumiGosu17 - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    The Task of Silence

    1. What do you think of the imagery (mainly sensory descriptions like sight, sound, smell, etc.)? Are there any contrasting parts you notice? I found it very interesting how you ...

    AyumiGosu17
    AyumiGosu17 - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    The Last Spell 28.1

    Hey there! Plume here, with a review! It's great to be back with Leilan and Kaja—I assume this means Mireya is with Dawn, which, big surprise there (not). It seems ...

    Plume
    Plume - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    The freedom of the ghosts

    I really like how this story turned out, with the good endings and all. I like the FNAF-like concept that their ghosts can only be freed with closure and the ...

    jadeactor
    jadeactor - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Humor, Satire
    ​The Gluten's Cruel Embrace: A Celiac's Lament

    Damn...Honestly, this kinda feels like a fever dream to me. I feel like this story kinda took the concept of Tantalus from Greek mythology and sprinkled some angst and real-world ...

    jadeactor
    jadeactor - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Scars In Blue: Part 1: Chapter 5: Shadows and Fire

    Wow, cool story! I really like the idea of a princess who can hear the voices of flames and the mystery of her father's disappearance. I decided to start with ...

    dragonight9
    dragonight9 - 14 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    The Last Spell 13.1

    Well. Figured I should probably start somewhere on the reviews haha. Maybe I'll be caught up by the end of RevMo! I'll be honest in my first read through of ...

    Ventomology
    Ventomology - 14 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    Round and Round Chapter 1

    Hey there jadeactor! Icy here for a quick review this Friday :) For a first time writer, this was really well written! I'm going to kick off with a technical ...

    IcyFlame
    IcyFlame - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    Round and Round Chapter 1

    I did not expect that ending. I wonder now if that really happened. Maybe it was just a dream…or when Jake “wakes up”, he actually goes into the afterlife. What ...

    vampricone6783
    vampricone6783 - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Scars In Blue: Part 1: Chapter 5: Shadows and Fire

    Salutations, curious mind! Rinisha here, ready to dive into the pages of this intriguing story. 📚! Buckle up, 'cause we're diving into my review magic! ✨ The Good Stuff: First ...

    Rinisha
    Rinisha - 16 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Chickens, General
    The Gentle Creatures

    Hello Doss! In all honesty, I am writing this instead of paying attention to a rather boring class. It's a bit of a busy season for me and your poem ...

    wonderinthewings
    wonderinthewings - 17 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic
    Highway of Darkness

    This is a pretty good story. There could be a little more elaboration on exactly how long this person has been in captivity. This appears to be a story about ...

    RazorSharpPencil
    RazorSharpPencil - 18 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Shadow's Rising Chapter 9 (part 2)

    I've never read this before, but it looks quite interesting, and I love dragons! Let's dive in. The good stuff: Your grammar is amazing! Never do I see someone who ...

    Serrurie
    Serrurie - 18 hours ago


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