Hello! Let's give you another review, shall we? I'm afraid to say that I'm not always the best at reviews, but I hope this is passable: First of all, I'm ...

I liked this poem even though I was a little confused at the begging. I had something like this where my family was best friends with this other family and ...

First of all your tittle gave me the chills, automatic click. I love how you are using something as playful as writing to get you point across to all of ...

Awwwwwwwwww this was so cute in so many waaaays. I really like the choice of using Rowan's POV here so we can get an outside perspective of everyone else and ...

Hello, fellow writer! This poem is super interesting! Your idea is genius, and I love the way it's dark and yet not dark, if you know what I mean. It ...

This poem was brilliant! How did you come up with such a fun, unique plot? It was amazing,, and I hope you know that. The way you put so much ...

Hey there! I really like the idea of this scene! I think it's clever that you added "This is easy" throughout the scene. "Oh, the prince was beautiful, not much ...

I love this! It's lively, smooth and engaging throughout! The only thing that sets me off a bit is the way the character's thoughts are expressed. I would use italics ...

This story is a wonderful concept, however it requires more emotion. It seems a bit stiff. I do love the imagery, and the vocabulary! It isn't as engaging as I'd ...

Awww! This is super sweet! You should DEFINITELY give it to your friend!!! It will be something treasured between you forever. That being said, this is a really precious piece. ...

Hey, there! Nice poem! It is well-written, and the rhyme scheme is consistent. I realize that non-rhyming poetry is popular, but I always like to see a good rhyming poem. ...

Hey, there. This is a very interesting work, and definitely a unique perspective. Your creativity blossoms all over this piece. (The pun wasn't necessarily intended, but, hey... ;) ) You've ...

I do love your writing style! It's clean, modern and easy to follow. However, the mixture between simple and more complicated vocabulary does put me off. It is alright for ...

Hello! I couldn't help but notice a few grammical mistakes in your writing. For instance, the writing fails to remain in a past tense. "She can't even remember" Should be: ...

Hello and welcome to YWS. I can see you just joined. I have been on here for like ten years (I'm old lol). I don't get on very often if ...