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Literary Spotlight

A Writer's Afterlife
by LJF in Poetry » Dramatic


My Grandpa Is Dead
by rosette in Short Story » Realistic


A Storm of Us
by AutoPilot in Poetry » Dramatic


I want to be like Google
by Googlebot in Poetry » Realistic


Yesterday
by Elinor in Script » Film


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  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Other
    It Was The Color Of Your Hair

    Hiya! Space here for a review! Wow, even though this poem was short and very straight-forward, the message it sent about you and the best friend was very strong. You ...

    SpaceSnickerdoodle
    SpaceSnickerdoodle - 6 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror
    Insane

    It is truly saddening that there are actually real live human beings who think exactly how you describe this person. Unfortunately, some aren't quite as transparent and are experts in ...

    Radrook
    Radrook - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, General
    In Your eyes

    Thanks for sharing this poem about finding the ideal woman. The poem mentions that this perfection can be detected in he eyes. Which makes sense since we as humans do ...

    Radrook
    Radrook - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Realistic, Technology
    I want to be like Google

    I love this because not only do you express in free verse, you also create imagery of what Google does. My favorite line I think, would be "As open-minded as ...

    Lake
    Lake - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    1

    Hello! I'm here to leave a review on this lovely work! I really like this concept! The soul-sucking thing is a nice spin on the dystopian genre. I also enjoyed ...

    QueenofSomewhere
    QueenofSomewhere - 5 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    1935 - 2.2

    "Aliens: A Poem" You lost me at aliens I am so uninterested in aliens Aliens kind of annoy me Moving on ANYWAY. Leaving aside my personal disinterest in aliens except ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Supernatural
    How Was Your Day? - Chapter 23.1

    Okay, not gonna lie, at first I still had this feeling Henry was going to be bad for some reason. I don't know what it is, unless it's still just ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Conics Unfortunately: 48

    What is it with you and bathrooms? Most relateable a bounty hunter has ever been. Before he showed up in this chapter, I definitely thought about the fact that we've ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 6 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Humor, Horror
    An Apartment Conversation.

    I really like this piece. Endlessly inventive; in fact, I think you even cram too many jokes into under a thousand words. My advice is going to overlap with Carina's, ...

    LukeStarkiller
    LukeStarkiller - 13 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, Humor
    Life: Commentated (part two)

    Just like Part One, this is endlessly inventive. I love the way you poke fun at the conventions of TV and the media in general in a way that isn't ...

    LukeStarkiller
    LukeStarkiller - 14 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » General, Humor
    Life: Commentated

    This is fantastic. Just so flat-out entertaining, and most of this is due to your hilarious and original premise. You should really label this as a satire (in addition to ...

    LukeStarkiller
    LukeStarkiller - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Other » Other, Other
    And When You Opened Your Eyes Part.1

    This was so deep, now at first I thought you were talking about a girl that you wanted to be with so badly, but then I realized you had been ...

    Lake
    Lake - 15 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, General
    Smoke and Mirrors

    This is inspiring, honestly it is, and in certain cases, I almost think you're talking about Fluma ;) But anyways, I loved this, I don't have any suggestions for you ...

    Lake
    Lake - 16 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Conics Unfortunately: 48

    “Go ahead and sue,” the man challenged. He stepped forward, and his hands came out of his pockets, both free and poised to grab her. “The moment any evidence marks ...

    TheSilverFox
    TheSilverFox - 16 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    Love: A Poem in Three Parts

    This was just amazing. I just...wow. This spoke to me deeply, so congratulations. At first, it seemed as if the first boy you had loved treated you fair, but then ...

    Lake
    Lake - 16 hours ago


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