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for so long
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She Likes Girls
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Broken Girl
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drunk driver
by screamingsloth in Poetry » Dramatic


The Tree
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  • Reviews » Poetry » Lyrical, Historical Fiction
    ​Four Knights

    Good day to you, Pernicus. This poem you have written isn't a very common one to come across in that there is a riddle involved within the rhymes. I'm not ...

    Sourire
    Sourire - 16 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 8

    Woot woot! Nit-picks and nice moments: "It is horrid," she whispered, casting her eyes to the ground. I forget if I've said this before or not but I think you ...

    BiscuitsLeGuin
    BiscuitsLeGuin - 36 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Romantic, General
    Forever

    Hey there, Luata here for a review. As it is pretty much first thing in the morning and I'm still sort of groggy, bear with me if my review begins ...

    Biluata
    Biluata - 58 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    drunk driver

    Hey screamingsloth! I must say well done! The poem really brings out the essence of thrill,suspense and fear while maintaining its rhythm and flow. At points it may seem slightly ...

    Sharon1407
    Sharon1407 - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic
    Liz + Zac (Epilogue)

    1. Thoughts on Liz. Her personality. her motivations. her angst. (too much?) her choices. likable enough? did you root for her? TOO MUCH ANGST, YES. Sometimes I just wanted to ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural
    Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 19 & 20

    Her mom is going to have a heart attack. Like, she *just* woke up. Maybe they should give Logan and/or the nurses some time to prepare her for the fact ...

    BlueAfrica
    BlueAfrica - 3 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Ascension: Thørn 18 (The Myriad book 1)

    Ascension: Thørn 18 (The Myriad book 1) by Feltrix Specifics 1. Are the rooms they are being led to still in this underground part where the prisoners are being kept ...

    Rydia
    Rydia - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction
    There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 13

    Hello, marms! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Mage
    Mage - 4 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Humor, Realistic
    White Fire

    Hello, myjaspercat. I am going to start off with criticism then work my way into compliments or positive thoughts. Huge wall of text here: I don't even like cats y ...

    Sourire
    Sourire - 8 hours ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Humor, Realistic
    White Fire

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. I had a good laugh after reading this story. It was superb and kind of realistic. Okay, now coming to the ...

    DarshayataDeka
    DarshayataDeka - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Other » General, General
    the past

    Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review. First of all, this essay is simply AMAZING. I am sure that every teenager, which includes me, can relate to it. ...

    DarshayataDeka
    DarshayataDeka - 9 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    drunk driver

    Hey there screamingsloth! Great job on the poem! I really liked being able to visualize everything as it unfolded. I felt that it was fast paced, but for the topic ...

    iamanaspiringwriter
    iamanaspiringwriter - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    drunk driver

    I just read your poem and...WOW!!! I mean, I had to read it thrice and each time, I was speechless. How can you be so perfect? The words, the punctuations, ...

    DarshayataDeka
    DarshayataDeka - 10 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Stranger

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. Welcome to YWS, luhman! If you ever have any questions, don't be afraid to ask me or any other names in ...

    Nikayla
    Nikayla - 11 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Rewrite of Attack

    Hey ThisisLegacy, This poem is SO much clearer than "Attack" with what it's talking about. Like, I'm still not 100% on all of the details, but the meaning behind the ...

    Aley
    Aley - 11 hours ago


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