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Another poem entered in a poetry contest, please give feed back:)I open my eyesTo look through my list.I don’t know which to pick,Release the sighs.It’s the end of the dayAnd ...
OptimismUnderRain - Apr 13, 2011 - 1 min read
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I entered this for a poetry contest and wanted some feedback. Silence Fills my room.Confusion You must assume.Regret Reminds me of the past.DoubtThat this won’t last.HauntIs what it is.ForgetIs what
OptimismUnderRain - Apr 13, 2011 - 1 min read
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My name is Jack Grandcolas, a 46 year old man, but I’m not normal. When I was 28 years old I married the woman of my dreams. We wanted a ...
poemsandstories13 - Apr 13, 2011 - 3 min read
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Author's Note: Another amateur poem from the public domain. Enjoy.Quit staring at me with those large, round eyes.I don't deserve your scrutiny, their lies.I'm not the beauty people claimed to ...
PandaAiKorai - Apr 13, 2011 - 1 min read
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Spoiler! : Was ticked when I wrote this. But I wrote it very quickly. I would love critique
HessicaJolt - Apr 13, 2011 - 2 min read
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WHEN I FALLPROLOGUE & CHAPTER ONE(To make it look clean, and organized, I placed them in spoilers.)PROLOGUE Spoiler! : PrologueIt was warm and tender. It slowly increased in intensity, harshness, ...
califorrniasummer - Apr 13, 2011 - 5 min read
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Her warm body, so close to mineHer bright smile, more deviousThe way she looks at meAs she slowly creeps towards meI can see her skin through her shirtHer dark eyes ...
sapphirewednesday - Apr 13, 2011 - 1 min read
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The Mysterious Girl in Black 3"Melissa, how many times do I need to tell you to wear your uniform!" The teacher, Mrs. Ryan, demanded. "Go back home and put on ...
armstronge - Apr 13, 2011 - 12 min read
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Chapter Two : BlindfoldedShe was insane.There was no denying the truth any longer, it would simply catch up to her and stick her in the forehead. She understood the consequences ...
WrittenInStone - Apr 13, 2011 - 10 min read
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Authors Note ~ Hi everyone, glad you've decided to check out this piece of my work. I'd just like to point out that this is a rough draft. I have ...
WrittenInStone - Apr 13, 2011 - 8 min read
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It would have seemed like an ordinary day, coffee in the morning, checking the mail, driving to work. No one ever expects the unexpected. It seems as if your life ...
jaustenFan18 - Apr 13, 2011 - 2 min read
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We all know her.That girl.The one who hides her face,even after you've seen her tears.She smiles and jokes,even though her make-up's smeared.She tries her darndest,to be her strongest.After all, that'
kristenailene50878 - Apr 13, 2011 - 1 min read
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The sun filters into the room, evading the curtains it shines over the bed. Eventually it wakes me up, since I was a child I have never been able to ...
Spanta - Apr 13, 2011 - 27 min read
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Light shone on my face, and a inconstant hum of voices carried to where i was. My eyes closed as I tried to remember. My head aced, what happened? I ...
BerlynnRae - Apr 13, 2011 - 7 min read
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Mike Braush slowly made his way through the winding path in the woods. He was a 21 year old college student from Iowa. He was on summer break, and had ...
Bivrax - Apr 13, 2011 - 9 min read