Hi! I love this poem! In my opinion, The poetic diction is self-explanatory which makes it easy for a reader to relate to the poem. I also love the voice that resonates in this poem. It's sounds low but seems to shout a powerful message that compels a reader to actually believe in your flaws. On the other hand, most times the ride the poem gives the reader comes to a stops at some ends. Is it cause you're trying force your poem to rhyme? Other than that, I feel the poem is a good one and certainly has potential. Keep it up!
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