Young Writers Society

Guess what! This was also removed. And again, if you critiqued it, I thank you.

Not much help, but I thought it was good...

Cold winds lost in time, they take away, they shatter lifes. Empty spaces in your body, they fill it up with ice. Ice so cold it turns in to stone, ...

This is an angle from the other characters story. Banzai, Thavyr, and a few others will meet. Banzai Shimoto, the infamous assassin, made his way silently down the old cobblestone ...

The sun crept over the forested green landscape, illuminating the few dark, damaged buildings nestled there between two steep grassy hills. An eerie silence had settled over the small trade ...

The bard leaned in over the table, eager for the tale, everseeking stories of adventure for his retelling. The elder gnome patiently sipped his mead, playing off the excitement of ...

Removed. If you looked over it for me, I thank you.

I sat in the corner of my classroom. I was like every other 2nd grader, stupid. I slowly stood up and trotted toward my stout teacher. "Umm, I think Genevieve ...

The playground hummed with the rhythm of jump ropes hitting the ground. “A- one, a-two, baby got loose, better skip jump, girl, he’s coming for you.” The girls weaved in ...

Kill it. ~~~~~ Lights Girl stands alone. Up, she looks to a noise. No. Lights up. Boy stands with girl, center. He looks left, she looks right. They face one ...

i dream of a man whose hopes never end of love that wont cost a sweet bitter sin flames that dont dim no pieces to be glued or tightening the ...

Snoink wrote:Gah... you have such a dry tone. Why can't you be angsty and overdramatic like everyone else? Just for you, m'dear. ENDINGS Look out your world escapes, between the ...

Sleeping Along the Roadside 12-26-05 Tangle me up and we’ll slide Temple dreams and fragrant blankets echoes of a lost place peaceful reactions, explosions, and weeping from highway to highway ...

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Requiem They hate me, why? What I do I try hard to please them, But to no avail. They never wanted me; I realize that now Why they hate me? ...