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How I feel^
Haha I get the joke now. I didn’t see that the scrambled words made smaller words until like 5 seconds ago. I especially like fusnocoin. The flurry of words is a vivid verse, me gusta él.

Just wanted to say that I love this poem! All of your poems are so unique, creative, and genius. I really enjoy reading them <3

Hi, this is Kahlene! I wanted to review your poem because I absolutely love poems!

Hmmm, I see. This poem has creativity written all over it. I love how you wrote this poem. I love how you used the word confusion at the beginning of each stanza, but it was all scrambled up, hence the name of the poem.

I love the literary devices in this poem, and the context in here, I approve! Also, the whole poem flows together, obviously, this poem took a lot of thought and time to come up with. I am glad you wrote this because the poem sums up my mind.

This is a short review here, sorry. There isn't a lot I can suggest or complain about, this poem is good! Anyway, I hope you continue to write like this so I can read and get confused and reread and totally relate. I hope you have a good day!

Hello! I am astonished to see such a great literary work. Well done and keep it up! It has been beautifully written. The best thing I forgot to write about this poem is it's unique title and theme. That was what attracted me towards it. It's title makes it stand different amongst the other poems. A fabulous poem and I must say, I would like to read more such poems in future from you. So keep going. I wish you a good luck for more such literary works in coming days.

Best wishes
Mahira

Hey, whatchamacallit! I haven't reviewed much in a long time, but this poem caught my eye.

Okay, so right at the start, I'm scrolling through the poetry feed, and your title and description grabbed my attention. Unscramble this? A challenge? Hoo-hoo, oh boy, my stupid little goblin brain is already excited. It's an excellent way to get more attention given to your poem.

Usually, I think I'm pretty smart and good at unscrambling words. How foolish of me. As it turns out, my stupid little goblin brain is pretty stupid and little. I only realized the pure genius and beauty of this poem by the time I was reading about coins. Also, I didn't figure out the scrambled word was "confusion" until I read it with my own two eyes. MAJOR facepalm. Hardcore oof.

Once it clicked, however, I was blown away. STRAIGHT UP GENIUS! I love it. It's so creative and fresh. I have never been so in love with words on a page. I love reading pieces that are so different than my style. Finding something an author does that I would never be able to think of is like tossing shiny things to my goblin brain. I'm just honestly so proud of you?? I don't know man, maybe I'm just emotional today, but this is great, I love you so much, keep writing beautiful things like this, bye

-yubbies21

Hey! Sorry it's not a review (I'm not very good in poetry) but I found your poem quite interesting. At first I wasn't sure what were those words in beginning of every stanza and then I realized your intention. Great idea. It was a pleasure to read your poem.

Hi Watcha!
I'm Shade and I'm here to review your work.

I loved the concept of this poem, and it seems really relatable to me sometimes because this what I feel on bad days.

Your last stanza? Sorry, can't remember what to call it. Let's just go with stanza.
Your last stanza was my favorite. I love the fact that you hid the word confusion in there.

my brain is
a "con" man
"fus"ing my thoughts
into "ion"s of nonsense.