dear trump

by veeren

Published November 10, 2016

18+ Language

In Terrible Poetry

Warning: This work has been rated 18+ for language.

fuck you

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yoshikrab
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yoshikrab commented Comment · Aug 5, 2021

what an immense atmosphere of inspiration you can create just by publishing two words

veeren replied · Aug 5, 2021

mwehehe

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manilla
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manilla commented Comment · Mar 24, 2021

I'm so glad you put this in the poetry category.

veeren replied · Mar 24, 2021

:,,,)))

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Riverlight
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Riverlight wrote a review Review · Sep 14, 2020

Dear Veeren,

Though it is highly unlikely that you will ever see this, I applaud you for the wasteful use of points and the deep meanings that lie within your two words. I will, for once, applaud indecency and vulgarity simply because of your great work. I ask that in the future, however, that you use more than just two mere words to define how you feel. Though these two simple words carry much weight, the more the merrier.

Sincerely,
Vilnius

veeren replied · Sep 14, 2020

jokes on you, i will see this.


thank you for the feedback<3

Oh, wow XD

Of course, anything to help out a fellow Trump hater.

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OofOof1
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OofOof1 commented Comment · Mar 14, 2019

Yeah

GodfreysBouillon commented Comment · Jun 1, 2018

What a mature way to deal with anger!

veeren replied · Jun 2, 2018

quite

HalfbloodFangirl commented Comment · Apr 2, 2018

Beautiful! By far the best thing I have seen! This made my day!

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Bellarke
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Bellarke commented Comment · Feb 15, 2018

Genius!! This is a work of art, and needs to be published and put in a museum!

You are such a genius!!! I bow down to you!!!

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zaminami
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zaminami commented Comment · Oct 27, 2017

This is genius I swear!!

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IrisNight
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IrisNight commented Comment · Feb 21, 2017

a applaud you!

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Aleta
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Aleta wrote a review Review · Dec 22, 2016

Your first review, congratulations! This message is very deep and it makes me really comprehend life in general. These two words really bring out your emotion--perhaps you should write a novel about it! Although my critique is, shouldn't you extend on the fuck you? Perhaps a neat little list would do! Or you could ask 21 Savage to write a heartfelt song about it. Best work on here, woAh!

veeren replied · Dec 22, 2016

thank you for taking time out of your day to gaze upon this painfully boring piece of literature, it means a lot to me

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Aleta
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Aleta commented Comment · Dec 22, 2016

this is touching

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AmyMedek
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AmyMedek commented Comment · Dec 1, 2016

Wow, so simple. But to the point.

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BeautifulSoul commented Comment · Nov 17, 2016

This is so relatable wow

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Tootsie commented Comment · Nov 17, 2016

This is straight and to the point. I can't stand him as well!

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Sonder commented Comment · Nov 11, 2016

question: am I not seeing this in the spotlight cuz it's rated for language?

Also 8/8 gr8 m8 would r8 again A+++

veeren replied · Nov 12, 2016

i was actually wondering the same thing tbh

Mea replied · Nov 12, 2016

Yeah, 18 works don't show in the spotlight.

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TheShadowMan wrote a review Review · Nov 10, 2016

I understand the anger your feeling right now but if you think about it would you really want Hillary to be president. She Has committed crimes against the United States. I personally don't like either Nominees. also if we manage to survive these 4 years of his reign.

We will have to see trump for re-election as well as Ahem Kanye will also be running for President as well so, Would you rather have trump or Kanye hmm, Also i'm going to be sleeping better now that Trump is going to make Friends with Russia So the U.S. is going to be BFF's with Russia that's one less country that could nuke us.

It's all very well feeling safe that Russia won't nuke you, but with Trump at America's reins, the rest of the world is increasingly afraid that YOU could nuke US

veeren replied · Nov 10, 2016

feel free to use this as a space to debate but i'm personally not here to talk about anything political. this was just to relieve stress.

@TheShadowMan multiple investigations have concluded that Hillary has committed no crime. Hillary is a diplomat who would make sure that tensions between the USA and Russia did not rise too high, as she did during her long time in public service. Plus, being pro Putin is not good, given what how he's dealt with members of his own country who've opposed him. Trump, on the other hand, is under criminal lawsuit for fraud and has threatened to bomb Iran simply for rude gestures. That's all I'm going to say. I'm leaving this at that.

Just jumping into this, but Trump was the one who spread stuff about Hillary in the first place.

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Persistence
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Persistence wrote a review Review · Nov 10, 2016

Fifty percent of this work consists of explicit language, worthy of the object of its content. Though, perhaps the message goes deeper than the surface. Perhaps the author meant to satirize the abundance of people calling Trump out. Perhaps it is an expression of endearment towards the elected president, saying "fuck you" (forgive for quoting so much of this work) in a playful way, sarcastically sending Trump the message that they in fact support him and share his ideals.

Or, it could just be telling the trumpet to shove it. Fuck that guy.

*gets taken away by agents the next day*

veeren replied · Nov 10, 2016

this was actually hilarious you deserve those points

Thank you!! ^^

Seee u didn't lose ur humour boi

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Scartuina commented Comment · Nov 10, 2016

I want to thank you for sacrificing 200 of your own points for such a noble message, it will not fall on deaf ears.

veeren replied · Nov 10, 2016

no, thank you, for taking the time to share your thoughts <3

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veeren commented Comment · Nov 10, 2016

man this was the best waste of 200 points ever.
i'll probably delete this after my blood stops boiling but until then i think this'll do just fine.

Yeah, probably, but now you saved me from wasting 200 points because you said it all right here

veeren replied · Nov 10, 2016

all in a days work

Sujana replied · Nov 10, 2016

I love how this'll probably be on the spotlight. Normally I'd say "it doesnt deserve to be there theres no thought or effort" but then I remember this is donald we're talking about he cant bother to put enough thought and effort to be a decent human being he deserves no long essay

veeren replied · Nov 10, 2016

spotlight or not this was just an easy way for me to deal with the stress of the election and it felt soooooo good

four years later veers blood still boils

nine years later. this still holds true



That's how we should measure our lives. Not in distance traveled, or time passed, or worlds conquered, but in moments... and the rush of joy—of grace—that exists within them.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)