Hey! Forever here with a review!!
This origin story made me wonder about a lot of things. I am going to focus on it specifically as well as the whole thing. So, we are now entering the supernatural stage where murders are happening by some supernatural means. Okay, going back, Isabella promised herself that she would take revenge on Lucas and pain him as much as possible. When you said it, I thought that she would not kill him but pain him a lot in his human life. That didn't happen. Instead, she killed him. I don't know about the relations between people in afterlife. I mean Lucas turned out to be a demon. That's clear but what did the others turned out to be? I would like a bit of clarification on this topic. And also, if they have any sort of fight in afterlife.
Near about everyone is being killed and now I am afraid that thid town of Richardson will no longer be a town of humans. Rather, it will be a town of afterlife creatures. Like, everyone will be dead in no time. I don't know what to expect after this. Maybe some more characters being killed and also, some fights between the deads.
Now Samuel. Seems like he loved his sister very much and cared about her. He had to go with her to the circus, even though he didn't like it at all. Or maybe, he did like it but he preferred TV over the circus. Here, the circus scene was a bit confusing. Like why would people go to mock someone's death months after they died? That doesn't seem very practical. Also, from the little I have understood about Samuel, he doesn't seem to be such a person. I guess you have got to find some other reason for him going to the circis and it's bettef to remove Bubblegum's murder from the story. The person to tell him can simply be soemone else, maybe Isabella.
Now Lucas. Lucas was being very very sarcastic here. 'Fun man'. I wonder if he actually did some funny jobs in the circus. I mean at least in the front of the audience. Did he perform or he was simply the owner? Now Lucas has gained a human form. I don't know if he is still a demon but at least he can trick people to believe that he is a human.
I wondered about something else that is not included in the story. Why didn't the police do anything? As it is set in 90's, I do expect the police to do something. Like so many people are being killed and the police are quite silent. That's a bit strange. Also, I would like to know how the murder of Isabella and William was discovered. As far as I can remember, Lucas buried them into the soil in the jungle. How were the discovered? Did Isabella do anything? Another one, why didn't Denise inform the police?
And as for your question, I am not the most sure but it should be either Isabella or Gabriel. Perhaps both of them at the same time.