*This song is from my “Town of Richardson” stories. The character singing this is a boy named Samuel after he died and was cursed to become a demon. Gacha Club character designs are on my wall. Enjoy!*
I…I’m all alone…
Alone and shunned
I’m a demon
But I won’t hurt anyone
Melinda, dear sister, the only one who isn’t afraid of me
The only one who holds onto me
I never knew that going to the circus was going to be the least of my worries
I never knew that I’d be turned into something else
I miss my family
I miss my life
I miss my friends
I miss everything
Please, I want my life back
Mr.Ladouceur, why did you take it from me?
I want to smile once again
I want to be human
I want to be loved
I want it all back
Please, if anyone is listening, help me
I feel so
A L O N E AN D S H U N N E D
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I haven’t read “Town of Richardson” yet, but I really enjoyed this poem!
I love how you portrayed Samuel’s emotions. He’s lost everything he held dearly by being turned into a demon. The readers can feel his desperation and desire to be human again.
My only suggestion is to expand on Melinda more. I want to know more about her (okay, this is partially my fault for not reading the story yet, but I’m planning to read it soon!)
—GengarIsBestBoy
this is really great, you know! its short and doesnt really rhyme, and ive never been a big fan of poems that dont rhyme, but other than that its good! it explains the emotions well and i could relate to the emotions. ever since i had some personal stuff done to me, ive been feeling the same way this demon Samuel has felt. alone and shunned. i can relate and thats what i like the most. you might have a knack for poetry, who knows?
wish you luck
i believe in you bye! <333