I don't think you info dumped too much and you don't need action in every chapter.Just a few suggestions -
Along the wall were lined many large oil lamps, kept shining and clean. [This is confusing. Perhaps 'Along the way, the walls were lined with many lamps that were constantly shining and clean.']
Kiera's family owned only a small portion of the large network of houses that belonged to the rest of the tribe.
The tribe [s]was[/s] were very socially inclined, and constantly visited each other, making good use of the well-lit tunnels that led through their section of the forest.
He found Kiera, coming from his Father's study.
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Other than that, a well written chapter and I agree that the rather one sided conversation between Kiera and her mother was the best part. I didn't find her brother to be a jerk though. I quite liked him in fact...
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