It left me hanging,
Backwards I rode
Two on the tracks
Smashing free, I'm alone.
Said you would see me
on a warm summer's day.
You know you had me slipping
Not here, but farther away.
People knew more,
and had their alibies.
I didn't think much
of all the lies passing me by.
I knew you were changing,
But I couldn't let go.
I broke your promise
and I flew home for me.
CHORUS
Home's where I stay
Home's where my heart belonged.
Home's where my ache was,
Home never did me wrong.
I knew you wouldn't like it,
But Home is where I'll stay
I thought alot about it,
Bottling up my broken heart....
At the end of a day.
END CHORUS
We were catching the moon,
shooting down stars,
hating the sun
we were who we are.
I'll see you
on a warm summer's day
You'll find me
cause home I'll stay.
We tripped over brandy,
we sat on your steps,
Raising the roof up,
And bending our senses.
I knew you had left me,
when the robins stopped their song,
An eerie type of quiet,
I knew it was called alone.
CHORUS
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
141,727 Literary Works • 675,620 Reviews
probably a country song or some light pop
This was good, what genre would you place it in?
Wow! I really liked hte first and last verses - they sounded absoloutly magical! The whole song was great and I think alot of people would listen to it if it was sung.
What you could have used to improve it though is punctaution - some lines start with capitials, others don't.
I also like how you kept it longer, but not too long, and also not boring.
Keep writing songs, I'd like to hear another.
Is this a song? I think that there is a lyric part of this website but I don't know I am new. The words are good. If it was a song I would probably listen to it