CHORUS
Hello Kitty Steamboat
Hey, who's in charge here?
Hello Kitty Steamboat
De nada, De nada.
Hello Kitty Steamboat
What else can I say?
Hello Kitty Steamboat
De nada, De nada.
As I walked this lonely road,
Stranger things have unfold.
And I seek in my time,
To funtion on this detour in life.
Obsessions all collide.
We're on a hell of a ride.
CHORUS
Take me with on your Fairy tales.
And your lonely ambitions will unfold.
Page by page they all unravel,
Your characters are all on this,
oragami ship to nowhere.
Obessesions all collide.
We're on a hell of a ride.
CHORUS
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HOlas jin and wtf. lol it was actually kinda good...creepy good. LOL
It's unique...but i like it a lot. yayz for you. sys. lolz
I liked this alot too. Awesome!
Keep up the good work,
-- M.B.Author
*twitch*
That was... CRAZY! XD it reminded me of this wicked crazy Japanese kid in my math class... but anyway...
When I read the first couple of lines, I thought to myself, "No, she didn't seriously write this."
But, it suprised my. I actually found myself singing along to it. Quite a catchy song in fact.
Change this to... we're on a
I think it'll flow better.
Other than this, I think it's a great song.
Congrats and kudos
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