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Hi there,
I decided to randomly look for pieces of work that I could offer a review and I never expected to find something so personal.
It's heart wrenching!
I feel like I have no place to critique this as it obviously is something close to you. Just wanted to let you know what someone has read it and loves it
I especially love the line "I'm the center of your world and that is just it." I like how final it is and you can really feel your frustration through all of the words.
Good luck & keep writing. Feel free to have a peek at some of my work when you have the time - even though it's a little less deep!
BYE!