*This fanfic is under my folder titled “FNAF fanfics”. This takes place in the past, when William and Henry are teens. Mena is my OC. FNAF stands for a video game franchise created by Scott Cawthon, William and Henry are characters in that franchise. Gacha Club character designs are underneath this forum: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=116005&start=1110. Anyway, enjoy!*
Henry sat in his normal spot, a two desks behind William, watching as William was very obviously staring at Mena, who was right next to him.
He didn’t understand why William was all obsessed with her when she didn’t even know him like he did. She didn’t know about all of the different characters he created, that he still slept with stuffed toys, that he thought faster than he could talk.
She didn’t know that both he and William would open up a pizzeria one day, dressed as Fredbear and SpringBonnie, the characters they made as children. She didn’t know and she didn’t deserve to know. She may have known about William’s family curse, but she would never understand like Henry did. She would leave him behind when he needed her most and Henry would be there to help him out, just like he always was.
Besides, she wasn’t even that pretty. She looked pretty average at best.
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Heya creeper! Happy review day! I'll leave my thoughts as I read.
Looks like an extra "a" slipped in there!
Haha, that's an interesting argument for why someone shouldn't have a crush on someone! It seems like Henry believes that, in order to become infatuated with another, that person should know you inside out first. What this seems to be heavily implying is that Henry is crushing on William. Does William know Henry as well as Henry knows William, I wonder?
Oooh how interesting! I'm always extra fond of the characters like Henry who are always loyal and stick with their friend (crush?) through thick and thin, even if the friend doesn't appreciate them at first. This miiight be verging on creepy, though - Henry seems a tad possessive and he's already dreaming up what their future will look like together. He's most definitely jealous, lol!
Hahaha. Yup, jealous!!
I really enjoyed this - well done as always!
Wolfi
Yes, they%u2019re both friends. But whatever Henry feels, he%u2019s not going to say.
I never said William didn%u2019t feel the same way at times, soo%u2026yep.
Thx for reading!
Can’t go wrong with the FNAF folder, the stories that I actually kinda feel qualified for xd For Violet Victory!
And again, it is so short ☹ I want more! I want stuff to really feel like a story I can get immersed in (I like Mena and I want to see where her story goes!)
But it do be nice to see some jealous griping coming from Henry xd
I…also find it in equal parts adorable and weird that he is so convinced that they will open this pizzeria. It sounds almost as if he has the ability of prophecy… Also very creepy that he just decides what Mena deserves to know or not. I do not like where this is going. And also I want more of it.