*This fanfic is underneath my folder titled “FNAF fanfics”. FNAF was created by Scott Cawthon. This is my AU of William Afton’s past life. Wilma is William’s older sister, Mena will be Ms. Afton in the future. Both Wilma and Mena are my OCs. Henry is canonically William’s best friend (probably his only friend lol). Gacha Club character designs are under my forum titled “My character designs<33[2]”. Enjoy!*
William and Mena were at the pizzeria for their date. He hadn’t told his parents about it, but he did tell Wilma and Henry. Wilma warned him with teary eyes not to talk to Mena. Henry smiled and said that he was happy for William.
William knew that Wilma might have been right, that his presence would only curse Mena, but…but his life was so lonely and she was so bright. Also, what if the curse didn’t exist at all? What if it was all just something that was made up? An urban legend, perhaps?
“What do you like to do?” Mena asked.
What…what did he like to do? He didn’t do much. He wasn’t like Wilma, who had many hobbies to occupy herself with. He either hung out with Henry, drew pictures, or did nothing.
But most of all, he liked coming to the pizzeria. The smell of the pizzas being made, the families coming in and out. There was nothing wrong with pizza. Everyone always came together, everyone was happy.
“I like coming here. I like to see everyone being together and eating pizza. They just seem so…carefree. Was that weird?” William asked. He didn’t want Mena to think that he was crazy, that would just drive her away.
Mena laughed softly.
“No, it’s not weird at all. I understand that. You feel like you’re in the moment, right?” Mena asked.
William nodded. Yes, those were the words. That was how he felt.
“I like to dance. That gets me in the moment, that makes me feel free.” Mena said.
“That’s nice.” William said.
He still couldn’t believe that he was really talking to Mena, that she hadn’t yet found out. It seemed too good to be true, like any second, he would wake up and realize that it was all a dream.
“You’re all tense. Are you alright?” Mena asked.
“Huh? No, I’m fine.” William said, relaxing his body. He didn’t realize that he was squeezing his arms to his sides until Mena pointed it out.
Perhaps it was time to tell her, as ridiculous as it would sound.
“I’m an Afton. My family is cursed.” William said.
Mena grinned and rolled her eyes.
“Yes, you’re cursed. Cursed with good looks.” Mena said with a giggle in her voice.
“No, it’s not that. We’re actually cursed.” William said, trying not to blush. He never had a girl compliment him before, but he couldn’t think of it too much. He had to tell her the truth.
“It’s said that my Great-Grandpa owned a factory where the people working in it were children. Children young and old. He enjoyed making them work and earning profit from it.”
“But one of the children was a witch. A little boy, about six years old. He was one of the kids who got beaten the most, because he stood up to my Great-Grandpa.”
“The factory burned down one day. All of the children died, but my Great-Grandpa survived. He suffered major health problems later. He kept saying that he saw a little boy in the corner of his room, laughing at him. People used to laugh off his story before they sent him to a mental hospital. Legend has it that the little boy cursed my Great-Grandpa and his descendants.”
“You don’t believe that, do you?” Mena asked when he finished his story.
William thought about his Dad, who had to move with a wheelchair. When he looked at old photos of his Dad, he could see that he was standing up, perfectly fine.
“My Mom is an Afton. My Dad uses a wheelchair to get around. Mom says that Dad used to walk before he married her. The day after the wedding, his legs didn’t work. It just happened overnight. Mom begged him to break up with her, but he stayed. He stayed and took her last name. It took a while for there to be a wheelchair, Mom used to carry him everywhere.”
“I know we just met, but I don’t want you to get hurt. My family name is a curse.” William said, his heart tinging with a bit of worry. Sure, it could have been made up, but still, the idea of it unsettled him and truthfully, he didn’t know what was possible and what wasn’t.
Mena put her hand on William’s. His skin prickled at her touch. It was a wonderful feeling of fleeting butterflies, but it wouldn’t last forever, would it?
“I think that it is all just awful coincidence. Even if you are cursed, so what? I’m sure that it’s worth it to be with you.” Mena said.
He hoped that the moment between him and Mena would never end.
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MWAHAHAHHA FINALLY! FINALLY a fandom I KNOW stuff about. I’m so happy.
Also I’m happy that Ravena reviewed this so it showed up in my usual stomping ground of “1 Review, sort by oldest”
Oh, having siblings be called Wilma and William is certainly a choice…
I like how he describes her as being so bright to his loneliness. Nice phrasing!
First you make me crave sandwich, now I want pizza. Ahh
I do feel you repeat the word “pizza” a bit too much here tho.
Also, remember the comma instead of the period if you write a character “saying” something. I rly think the trick might be to imagine the sentence part on its own. “He laughed” works on its own and therefore doesn’t need the comma. But “She demanded”? What did she demand? You always need something for “demand” and that something is the speech. Therefore, a comma 😊
OMG I love her:
And I realize I might not be as well versed in FNAF lore as I thought…. Or maybe this is you adding witches? In any case, I approve! Maybe THAT explains remnant!
I really love that it’s his father that took his wife’s name. I approve! Also love that she wanted to protect him by making him leave but he chose her no matter the consequences!
And Mena is following in his footsteps! Love the idea!
Thanks for sharing ;3
Yw. There are no witches in FNAF lore, I added them in.
Thx for reading!
Hello, My Friend!
Hiya, Creeper!! Rav here with another review for you!
To start, yay, I'm so excited to dip into your FNAF stories! So this was great, and I can tell that I'm yet again entering the series a little late—I will catch up on the previous stuff as soon as I'm able. However, I think I can still get everything you're going for here. A backstory for William...Considering Springtrap used to be my favorite animatronic, I can't say I'm not excited at the prospect! And this "family curse" would deeeefinitely make a lot of sense, considering what we know about the Aftons, lol.
Nothing to recommend for change, for now! So let's throw in some highlights!
I like this exploration of his character a bit. Sounds like, in this universe, William has always had a fixation with the pizzeria, Chuck-E-Cheese sort of style. Makes sense! And looking back, after learning about his curse, no wonder he likes the feeling of being around stable families, or getting distracted by games and lights, and whatnot. Kinda sad to think about, actually...
OOO, now that is an interesting bit of lore to give context to this curse!! If William sticks to what he becomes later in this universe, that will just be the ultimate "repeat the cycle" sort of moment...Tragic, but very cool!!
Aw ~ I mean, she is sorely mistaken I'm sure XD But still sweet in its own right!
Overall, that was very cool! I have to say, when I see FNAF fanfic, my mind goes to something with Michael or the dead kids, or Vanny since Security Breach came out. Very bold to give some lore to the most infamous killer in the fandom, and I like to see that initiative!
Anyway, nicely done!
"They who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
"Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality.”
"I would define, in brief, the poetry of words as the rhythmical creation of Beauty."
Thx :>
Don%u2019t worry, William will still go down this dark path%u2026
Yw! ^^
And awesome >:D
I love the story
Thank you! Here are other fanfics that connect to this (You can also go to my folder titled %u201CFNAF fanfics%u201D if you want to read more):
The dancing girl
It won’t work out
William asks Mena out
William and his kids