This isn't supposed to be deep or stirring and I wasn't aiming for morbid, so I really hope you don't come out of this poem thinking that way. I really hope you don't find alfredo sauce morbid. Enjoy.
Your creamy goodness calls me
I simply can’t resist
A good alfredo’s clearly
The best there ever is. . .t.
You call me to the table,
With that alluring smell,
Better than sauce alone
By the aroma I can tell
That Mama’s made alfredo
And I’ll be sleeping well
will cheese sauce in my belly
Nose full of alfredo smell.
Your taste is straight from heaven
And slides smoothly down my throat
You sit in my tummy so nicely,
My insides with cheese do coat.
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