Tick tick tick– I am here for a review!!!!
Akanbright, you are doing awesome!! Now let me come to the review.
Tick, tick, tick
goes the hand of time
which hasn't been good to us
'cause we failed to walk with it
I absolutely love this stanza. I adore the way you described the hands of clock as the hand of time. U described how that is a disadvantage as we can't walk with it.
I really like the other stanzas as well. You did an extremely good job in writing that second lines. Time really waits for no one. It's precious and if we don't catch it at time, it flies away.
Overall, a very good job
~Forever
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