Young Writers Society

This was a really lovely and sweet poem, and I certainly enjoyed reading it. As a Christian myself, it's hard for me sometimes to grasp exactly how grand God is, and how He can forgive us for all we've done. This poem really does well to encapsulate how great He is.

The first four lines create lovely imagery, and they're beautifully written. However, there is a bit of error in your grammar for lines 2, 3, and 4. Ex. "The plants grows..." "Plants" is plural, and so "grow" should be formatted to that.

The last couple of lines are absolutely beautiful, and they perfectly draw together and sum up the poem. Reading them, I get a vast sense of comfort and love.

Thank you for writing this! It's a wonderful poem, and you should definitely be proud.

This was a really sweet poem with a really sweet ending to it as well. The last two lines were so beautiful in the way that they were not only simplistically put, but ties the whole thing together with the message of love. It shows the author's gratitude for the world and illustrates the emotion behind each everyday object and how they are all connected. I also enjoyed the introduction to it and how you have started with lots of repetition but then contrasted that to humankind.

for your love is better than wine.

It loves without minding who I am, or what I've done.

I noticed some grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
"The plants grows/the clouds hangs/the trees bends"
Should be "the plants grow/the clouds hang/the trees bend."
"or what i've done"
I should be capitalized.
At the beginning of the sentence "the fathers love," the first letter should be capitalized, and since the love belongs to the father, it should have an apostrophe. At the very end, continuing with your punctuation style, there should be a period.
That's all. Cool poem. Peace.