Hullo there!
I decided to read the three experiences and then make a big review.
You seem in your poems to describe moments that stick to you. And I think you did good in describing them. You painted very vivid descriptions of the scenes and did well in taking us to a "present time". Keep going in this direction!
I think you could improve even more by intertwining your emotions in it. Work with what those scenes made you feel. What you experienced is potent for poems, but what do they mean in a bigger picture, that I want to know!
Points: 1976
Reviews: 18
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