Hi! It's review day and I am like... way behind in your story. WHOOPS. So I figured I would see how much I could catch up!
Sunny wondered how the variapet could store a negative number. Could a variapet take up negative space? What would that even look like? Or was there a different way to represent a negative number?
Her question was soon answered when Ingrid turned a bright red. "Oh, red is the opposite of green, right?" Sunny murmured to herself, mildly disappointed Ingrid hadn't actually taken up negative space.
Listen. Sunny might be disappointed, but I am so happy that Ingrid did not explode. I was worried for a moment!
"Woo-hoo! Give it up for the inspiring Ingrid the Integer!" Eniac beamed and gestured for Ingrid to bow.
Sunny clapped enthusiastically. "Go Ingrid!"
WOOOHOOOOOOOO!!!!
...Debbie is a bit derivative. I would probably have her and Ingrid share the stage since their show is similar.
Eniac bounced on his toes. "For our second to last act, we have Bobby the Boolean! So, Bobby, is five equal to ten? Bobby equal sign fifty equal sign equal sign ten semicolon. "
bobby = 50 == 10;
The variapet climbed on stage and immediately turned orange, displaying "false" on his front.
Omg, Bobby is a truthseer. xD
"And finally, we have Charlie the Character. He'll be using a loop and the ASCII table to sing the alphabet song! Well, to show the alphabet, at least."
OMG, I hate loops so much. XD Hopefully, Charlie makes it better...
Sunny bent down and petted Debbie (so soft!), then asked, "Was that the problem?"
The "so soft!" part sounds a little bit odd...
Eniac glanced up at her. "Oh, yes, thank you. It's all coming back to me now… How could I forget? It's an incompatible types error."
"Right! Robert mentioned that you're the guardian for that error. But what does it mean?"
Okay, so the thing that I am wondering now is how could the guardian for the error make such an error happen? It makes me wonder what it really means to be a guardian for the error. I had assumed that it meant that they would help others that struggled with the error, but now I wonder if there is another reason why he is the guardian for the error. Maybe he is the guardian of the error because he consistently makes that error???
"It happens when you try to set a variable to a value of a different type. Like with Charlie." Eniac frowned. "There was a solution to this one… A way to convert between integers and characters… Darn, it's slipping away again." He paused for a moment, then snapped his fingers. "Wait, I got it!"
This is why loops are the literal worst.
Sunny applauded enthusiastically. Eniac sighed in relief and stood up again, bowing with a flourish. "And that, my dear audience, was Eniac and the Variapets' Show Spectacular! I do hope you'll come back another time when the show isn't interrupted by errors."
I would probably break up the characters' actions a bit more... so like...
Sunny applauded enthusiastically.
Eniac sighed in relief and stood up again, bowing with a flourish. "And that, my dear audience, was Eniac and the Variapets' Show Spectacular! I do hope you'll come back another time when the show isn't interrupted by errors."
"But it seems like that information has escaped to Spaghetti Code Mountain as well." His expression darkened. "Escaped, or been kidnapped."
Dun dun dunnnnnn!
I am starting to get excited about seeing this mysterious Spaghetti Code Mountain, lol.
Sunny nodded understandingly. "Well, if the information has been kidnapped, does that mean there's someone behind it? A big bad villain, perhaps?" Her eyes glinted.
I... cannot imagine Sunny fighting a big bad villain, for some reason, lol. BUT. MAYBE SHE WILL.
"Perhaps. But before we discuss this any more, I think we need all hands on deck." Eniac turned towards Robert. "Randy! Nap time's over."
YAY ROBERT'S BACK!!!!
...my daughter is reading this over my shoulder now and wants to read the whole thing now, haha. I think she likes the variapets. They are cute, after all...
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