First of all I like your first stanza. It really brought the readers to question what they had been doing that night.
Where were you,
when those towers fell,
when those people died,
and the world went to hell?
The second stanza now makes a lot of sense than what I have seen in the comments from an earlier copy. You're talking about how the killers died killing us.
Where were you that night,
when those people tried,
to murder us all,
but they themselves died?
The last line in the third stanza is for ghosts only people. Just so you know.
Where were you that night,
did you see them fall,
were you in a plane
did you live at all?
The last stanza, all I was told is that I was celebrating my 2nd birthday. Hard to forget your birthday, especially when a lot of people died on that day......
Where was I that night?
I don't really remember.
But we will never forget,
that day in September.
Points: 1659
Reviews: 18
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