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Hey, iwillnotbow!
~Sorry for posting this twice, I forgot to click review, in the spirit of review day!~
I'll keep this short and sweet:
Positives:
I like the energy
I like that it's not preppy xD
Negatives:
You need to include line breaks to break up thoughts
Overall: I like the poem very much, it just needs some elaboration and editing and it'll be great!
If I can be of any assistance, any at all, send me a message or post on my page and I'll get right back to you.
Sorry for keeping this so brief, I know it isn't much help..
Anyway, keep up the good work, iwillnotbow!
Yours always,
Euphoria
Hey, Euphoria!
You should have received an email earlier from Nate (it's sent to whatever email you use for YWS) that explains what happens if you forget to check the checkbox on Review Day.
Just reply to that email! Send him the link and tell him what happened. He said he'll fix it right up, so you shouldn't have to double-post.
Keep reviewing!
Thanks, Jab. I didn't see any email, but I'll go check again now.
Hey, iwillnotbow!
I'll keep this short and sweet:
Positives:
I like the energy
I like that it's not preppy xD
Negatives:
You need to include line breaks to break up thoughts
Overall: I like the poem very much, it just needs some elaboration and editing and it'll be great!
If I can be of any assistance, any at all, send me a message or post on my page and I'll get right back to you.
Sorry for keeping this so brief, I know it isn't much help..
Anyway, keep up the good work, iwillnotbow!
Yours always,
Euphoria
You're welcome
haha(if it's me...) And, really nice poem!
Well the last part was you and the first part was for the people who picked on me on my first day of school ever here. And thank you