She comes to you with a dead look on her face,
Blood running down her arm and dripping on the floor a razor in her other hand.
"I'm fine." She says, "I just came to say goodbye."
She is broken inside, just another shadered soul.
To her the words 'I'm fine' means she isn't dead yet.
'I'm fine' means she has to face another day she doesn't want to live.
But the way she said it, she sounded happy.
You get up to go after her and find her with the blade pressed to her wrist.
Again she says the over used lie, 'I'm fine', and starts the first cut.
You try to stop her, but she just cuts deeper.
Her blood gushes out like a fast flowing river does into the ocean.
The bleeding just won't stop, and you feel helpless as she lays there and dies.
You do the only thing you can do and call an ambulance as you pick her up into your arms.
You cry as you hold her close to your chest, "I'm fine, I'm fine." She mutters as her breath gets shallow,closer to death.
Each breath she breathes gets shallower and shallower.
With her last, helpless breath she mutters the words 'thank you'
ok, nicley written, but i think you should break the poem up a bit so its not in one block,
youre missing a few commas-eg- second line-there should be a comma before a razor.
watch your typing, youre missing a few letters, the blade pressed to *her wrist.
when you read through i say you'll see the little errors Im talking about, but its very well written!