What do we have here? A complete masterpiece! Just too perfect.
It is my second time I am gonna review your poetry and believe me, I am in love with your poems.
One thing I don't really see in poems nowadays, on YWS, is the well structure of it. I really wish the newcomers should take some time to read/see your poems and learn how to edit their poem properly.
And just one thing, which I personally felt, you lack in this poem is the use of punctuation! Why is that? Just two of them in the entire poem! You should try using more of them. It would make it easier for you, as well as for the reader, to understand better.
Other than that, it would be my stupidity to talk more on this really well written and amazing poem of yours. I wish I could write like you! It is really awesome.
Keep writing. You are just perfect!
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