I enjoyed the description of this poem.
Some things I would like to say about it is that the describing of what flowers prove is accurate and has a nice touch of imagery.
One thing that was odd was the mention of peacocks. Do you live in a place where they're common? XD
On other terms, just as advice, Try not to overuse "And." It makes it seem like its a run-on sentence that doesn't need to be.
Points: 174
Reviews: 22
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