It's like I can fly
though I do not
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I simply just stay there
in one little spot.
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I can be high
I can be low
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But that's not the point-
I'm a rainbow!
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Before you go
you must know
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That sometime soon
in the afternoon
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You'll see
a beautiful rainbow,
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And that's me.
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Hello there! Unknown391625 here with a review!
Lovely! This poem made me happy inside when I finished it! It is a very pleasant, short, nice, and neat poem! I really love this! It's very sweet and I definitely makes the happy factor! The words seemed to flow very well! Though, about your format, it isn't my favorite formatting, but that isn't really a nitpick. Just an opinion. The ending line though, I would have MAYBE emphasized it by putting an exclamation mark at the end. Just another opinion. Otherwise, as I said, no nitpicks whatsoever! I would love to see more of these amazing, wonderful, literary poetic masterpieces! Never, ever give up and always write, Sunset101!
-Unknown391625
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Intresting work here. it is short and sweet. I liked the use of imagery. I is cute! Here are my favorite lines!
It's like I can fly
though I do not
I simply just stay there
in one little spot.
I can be high
I can be low
It seemed to flow very well.
Keep up the great work!!!
But keep in mind the words you choose if you change some words around it may flow that much better.
Thanks, and I'm glad you like it.
Wow, I loved every line of this. There is nothing about this poem that I do not simply adore. I love how it sounds optimistic and colorful. It was colorful in a different way then how someone would describe a work. This is overall just a beautiful poem, and I think if someone is having a bad day they should read this!
Keep up the good work!
- Phoenix
This is just simply amazing. I loved the shortness of your poem. It was straight to the point and very understandable. However, I couldn't quite understand the purpose of your asterisks.. I don't know why there were asterisk, but it was overall amazing. I loved that you put in the beautiful and uplifting words and I also loved that you chose rainbow as your title, which was fascinating. Overall, great job. Keep writing and keep being awesome!