Infuriating

AutoPilot what the heck?!?!?! Why do you have to write something so.....

AMAZING AND EPIC AND OH MY GOSH I SWEAR THIS IS SERIOUSY ME IRL OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH MY BOYFRIEND HAS ALL THOSE POSITIVE TRAITS AND SERIOUSLY YOU DESCRIBED ME IN THERE.... VOODOO, I SAY! VOODOO!

Okay! Now that I have my humor and jealously out of the way, time for an actual review. The first two stanzas, I was like, ehh okay sounds like a typical teenage girl. It didn't quite hook me, but I decided to keep going. After all, I can soooooo relate to a teenage girl ... I am unfortunately but fortunately one

The emotions and simple use of vocabulary were well fluctuated with the flow of your work, but this jumped out at me:

You like me for those things
But what would you do if you met the third me?
The one that is emotionally train-wrecked
Who breaks the tension of her skin with blades
Who cries in the dark so no one will see her

OH MY GOSH AGAIN THIS IS ME I'VE DONE THIS AND FELT TRAIN-WRECKED WHY DO YOU HAVE TO WRITE SUCH A WORK THAT MAKES ME JEALOUS????

Thanks for sharing! By the way I have nothing negative to say

I love this poem, I can relate to it way too much ahaha! The words flow beautifully! The way you used phrases like "My guts twisted around in a constant fight," was an awesome way to describe how you were feeling, sort of like the cliche line "Butterflies in my stomach" but twisted around a bit which made it original.

I really like the ending where you described how you were feeling about it all - but in different ways. "Inside; there is a swirling vortex, in my conscious; there is a raging storm," etc. Throughout the poem you seem to describe the different feelings you experience, which is good as it sort of fits the image of 'crazy hormones' which you wrote about at the start.

Awesome!

You stuck to a clear message and even managed to stick a tone shift in at "You like me for those things," which is often admired when studying poetry. However, I would work on improving your vocabulary some. It comes with experience, but practicing always helps. Some parts of the poem seemed forced to stick with poetic devices. Such as, "Your adorable smile, it's my favorite part" is in backwards sentence structure and doesn't really need to be, unless you're trying for Yoda. I like that you had an anaphora going on with "your, your, your," but perhaps rearranging the phrase to "your adorable smile is my favorite part" would work just as well and make more sense.
You're off to a good start and I hope things get better for you if what you said about cutting is true. Things may look rough now, but there is always hope for the future. If you ever need anyone to talk to, I have an open ear.

Hey I'm Caitie.
First off I so relate to this, I don't understand why we need hormones. They just make life more confusing. You think you might like someone and you feel butterflies in your stomach and your heart aches when you see him smile. I love how you talk about that if you show the other sides to you how would they really feel. Sometimes we are too scared to let people see the more emotional and darker side(i guess?) of people. Again I just love this poem and I hope i get to read more of this kind of stuff because it is awesome.

You did a great job but I am going to give a few suggestions
1."Why can't we do away with them" Try putting a question mark at the end of this sentence. This is only because the rest of the poem has proper punctuation.
2.You put words that expresses feeling and that is good. What if you Balance that though with words that create a picture, For example:
"Inside; there is a swirling vortex
When On the outside; I still look clean and proper" It shows how that person feels and how they look on the outside.

Other than that I have nothing else to say. You did a very good job so keep up the great work!