Hey, I thought I would give you as good of a review as I can on this piece. It's short, and leadership is also an interesting topic, so let's see what we've got!
Leadership isn’t about a title or a plaque. It is sacrificing for those who look to you for guidance and direction.I would suggest cutting the title or plaque bit. You have 110 words to convince us that it is challenging but rewarding, and normally using a what it is and isn't contrast would work well, but in this case, I would say push for only what it IS. To most, sacrificing seems complicated and unnecessary; but to a leader, it’s daily life. I think an example, short and to the point would fit here perfectly instead of saying it is complicated and unnecessary. Instead, tell us a way that it would take sacrifice Along with sacrifice, leaders must also limit their pride. Leadership is not easy, put a period or a colon here patience will be tested, the same thing here there will be regrets and mistakes. A good leader gets rewarded with the smiles of children, the respect from those around them, and the feeling that they have done something worthwhile with their life. [b]solid ending, showing us why it is worth it in the end.
Overall, I did like this essay. I can imagine keeping it 100 words must have been extremely hard. (I struggle to be concise at times) I do think you did it well. Your style sounds essayish in all the right ways, without sounding clunky or confusing, yet still professional. I think you have a good piece here, but I would take into consideration the below review and this one for what it's worth. I think this essay is straightforward, but in no way should it offend anybody. (if it does they probably wouldn't make a good leader
)~Messy
Contractions will be your friend. Strong words and verbs will be your friend to make your point as concisely as possible. 
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