Even with three lines, the message of this poem is deeply meaningful of how painful and emotional this scenario can be for anyone. I could definitely feel a tugging inside me at how sad this would make anyone feel. But, who knows? I get easily emotional over a lot of fictional stories...
Now, I don't know if this is true or not, but I just want to say that you did an amazing job in conveying such deep emotion into just a few lines.
One thing I noticed is the syllables of the lines. If this is a haiku, the syllables of each line end up being 5-8-5. Be sure to double check how many syllables you have in each line as a future reference!
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