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XD

This was funny

Um, you are awesome, 'cause I always make parodies of Let it Go, but I also complete them. I advise you, now you don't have song writer's block, that you go ahead and finish this song so it can be an actual parody, not just a little part of it.


All I am is fhsifhekjfhejihjhfwkhfjiehfijde, so let's become weird buddies!

Hey, yo, puppys3117! Strangelove here on this PokeReview Day and I have a review for you! You know what, I can't count how much Frozen/Let It Go I've seen. I do eventually go on Wattpad, which is flooded with fan fiction and parodies and stuff, but there was a wave of those that hit YWS. Time to get onto the actual review
Lyrics
The lyrics aren't that bad overall. I mean, they express pride in themselves. "Ah, I love myself because I am weird!"-said a lot of people on this site. I understand that you should be proud to be weird, but are you really weird? I'm sorry, but it just doesn't feel right. It doesn't work together with the other factors to execute well
The actual beat
Yeah, I'm going to be honest, you must need to be a fast singer to actually perform this song. You jam big words which can cause a disruption. Songs need to be fluent, but for this to actually work, it would be extremely choppy and fast paced.
Overall, okay job.
Strange gives you...
Okay/10
Okay job,
Keep writing,
Stay groovy, my friend.

#TeamPlasmaStruck

Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day.

Which means...time to review!

Randomness glows in my eyes tonight,

Nothing normal to be seen.

Hey hey hey, Puppy. Let's jam.

I know you left off bits and pieces because of that darned writer's block--and I can't hold it against you.

My first question is in regards to the line

I am weird, I am weird!
It's time to break this pact.

Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here.

So whenever I review on of these, I always sing the song. It goes right along with the tune and I am grateful for that. You could be a little more original in some of your stanzas and not just take some things from the original song. I know it's hard to find something different but it always helps to look up things that you are writing about. Like I wrote a parody about letting go my cat, so I looked up stuff about holding cats. (I'm weird like that) You can always organize your piece into stanzas. I hope your songwriter's block has left you(the past is in the PASTTT) because I would love to hear more of this song. I could even help you if you would like. I always want to help my fellow citizens on YWS.

I love the lyrics. I would definitely sing this is the shower if I could memorize it. (I barely sing in the shower so that is a compliment XD) The overall theme is great. I want to sing this to my friends and them just going...she's a weirdo alright. XD Great job with this piece. I would love to see more. Have a nice review day! Keep calm and keep writing!

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Knight r4 here to review this work. I haven't done a review for a while so I decided to take a look at this work and see Frozen get mocked! I certainly hope this helps.

Now I may be wrong since I don't know the tune to let it go, but I am not quite sure if all these words go to the music. Then again, that may have been intentional. Who knows?Uh...you do of course.

I kind of got the same impression from this that you were trying to make the song sound as horrible as you possibly could. You even made yourself look like a weirdo. . This did add to the humor of the song, but I thought you could have made it sound slightly more professional.

My overall impression was that you were pretty much trying to mock the song...duh! However if this was intended to be a real, *professional,*parody you didn't do the best job. Happy writing!!! Oh wait! I almost forgot to ask. *Are you really weird?* Of course you aren't. Right? Hehehhe! Just kidding! I luv dis peace!!!

Umm...
All I can say is that you sound exactly like a few of my friends. Also, you should put more meaning into the words and maybe make it a bit longer. I've never reviewed a song before and I don't know what to say...
I like it though, it was creative. But there was a feeling of randomness you might want to check out. I liked it in general, but you might want to do something more, I don't know, else?

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