ok the title already says this, but this is the series finally of LAAC. BUT! I will be making a new story called Story Of My Life, so im not gone forever pplz!!!
The date was Wednesday, May 13, 2014. This happened to be Savvy's birthday- and her last. Two guards came to Savannah's cell and said, " Let's get moving. You know what's going to happen." After saying that last part, the guards gave her a 'look'. It was a look like they were saying, 'You know what's coming next.'
"Oh. ok... I will be there in a second. Can I talk to Caleb first?"
The guards looked at each other, then said, "Fine. This will be your last request though, ok?"
Savannah nodded. "Just bring Caleb in please, and I will do anything you ask me to."
Caleb walked in with rope around his wrists. Savvy wasn't exactly sure why he was, but she thought it was because he could help her escape. As soon as Caleb saw Savannah's cell, he started running. "Oh my gosh, Savvy! Are you ok? Did they hurt you yet!?"
"Calm down, Caleb", she said sadly. "They're not aloud to even hold a weapon at me until today."
"Why's today so special?", Caleb asked. Then he remembered. "Oh... right."
Guards walked into the hallway and shouted, "It's time, Hamilton! Enough chit-chat with your boyfriend over there!"
"He isn't my boyfriend for the last time!", Savvy said with a snap.
The police men opened her cell, handcuffed her, and shoved her down the hallway- down to the Courtyard.
Caleb turned to face Savannah's back and said, "But, Sav-"
"You know what my real name is, Caleb, so stop calling me Savannah!!!", she yelled with anger.
Walking down the same hallway was Margret and Channler. Margret was there for the pure joy it would bring for her; Channler was there because he couldn't believe any of this was happening. "Look who it is. Little Alex and, oh, what's this? She's with her cheating boyfriend! Oh how nice.", Margret said with an evil smirk.
"And look at this. A little pussy-cat thinks she can purr me to death? HAH!", Savvy said as a clever comeback. After she said this, Margret had a look of defeat in her eyes. She knew it was smart, but she tried to ignore it. As long as Savannah Tomas was going to be killed, then let her comeback reign.
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Margret, Channler, and Caleb were sitting next to the courtyard guards. Savannah was walking, almost limping, to her death spot. It was like in the movies- it was one of those things that chopped off your head.
Savvy prayed a quick little prayer in her mind that said, " Dear Jesus, please have something to distract them, or change their mind about killing me. What I did before was wack, and I regret it all. Please forgive me."
There it was, in the middle of the courtyard, the beheading machine. The guards shoved her head under it, and were just about to cut the rope, when they heard, " WAIT!" They looked over, and Caleb was on his feet and his hands in fists.
"LET ME TELL HER SOMETHING PLEASE AND MAYBE THEN YOU WILL UNDERSTAND A LITTLE DIFFERENTLY."
The guards nodded, and Caleb ran to Savvy. The cops took off Savannah's handcuffs so they could have a simple last-minute talk. Caleb hugged Savvy- hard. As soon as the guards saw them hugging, they understood their strong love for each other.
"Uhh... Alexis?"
"Yeah?"
"It looks like Margret here made a mistake. You were not sentenced to death."
"WHAT?!", Channler, Caleb Savvy and Margret yelled at the same time.
The cop continued. "We have decided that all you have to do is spend a few months in jail, then you're free and off the hook."
"Doesn't 'free' and 'off the hook' mean just about the same thing?", Channler asked.
"SHUT UP KID OR YOU WILL BE THE NEXT GUY IN HERE!", the very rude cop screamed.
"Mkay...", Channler said in fear.
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Caleb and Savvy were walking together in the other courtyard, without the killing machines.
"I wonder what made them change their minds...", Caleb thought out loud.
"I did pray before I walked in there, so maybe God had you distract them so I could live."
"Possibly... I'm just so happy!", Caleb said while swinging Savannah in the air.
"So am I. Just put me down!", Savvy said in a amused tone.
They sat down and talked for a little bit. Then, all of a sudden, Caleb lightly grabbed Savvy's face and kissed her. It was a surprise for both of them, but they both enjoy surprises.
BOOK 2 COMING SOON! FOR NOW, JUST LOOK FOWARD TO Story Of My Life, A NEW STORY IM WORKING ON.
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This was awesome. I really liked it! It was the best chapter in the book. in my opion.
I didn't see any mistakes in grammar or spelling.
Punchuation was good. No mmistakes there either.
I really liked how u used Cableb to stop them from killing Alexis. THis was awesome
A W E S O M E!!!! YAY
This was one of the best series I have ever read. Also You did a wonderful job and the bes series ever is now the bestest series ever.
k
See ya later firend.
Hi,
Sorry for any mistakes, I am on my phone.
Raven here for a review!
Spoiler
I have been following this story since the beginning and I hate to see this come to a close.
But nitpicks.
In the authors you start with a lowercase letter, fix that. Also, you say "im" and "pplz" I think you mean: "I'm" and "people".
Stuff in red: Aloud means out loud. I think you mean allowed.
And you described a guillotine. But in this modern time it would be a lethal injection of a poison that stops your heart, a electrical chair, or a firing squad. If you want to go into the western times they could hang her. But the guillotine is late 1600's (correct me if I am wrong.)
Also, it seems a little odd they would just call off her death sentence, but it is your story.
And the commas after the dialogue are really irking me, but hopefully you fix that bad habit.
Raven,
if u look at em101cats thing u will understand why I do the commas. and I couldn't think of anything else I know nothing about jail XD
Oh, I understand that is a bad habit. That's why I said I hope you will fix that habit.
ya I hope so too :3
and I forgot to say, the jail could be an old-fashioned one that hasn't been updated is YEARS
Yes, but that is highly unlikely
its slightly likely XD
Yeah,
XD
Tell me when you post the next chapter!
the next chapter wont be here for a while. and techlicly, it would be book 2 :3
Hello!!!!
OH. MY. GOSH. HOLY CHEESE AND CRACKERS THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
Yay, happy endings
There are some times when you do this again:
EXAMPLE: "Lol",
The comma goes inside like this - "Lol," but when you have a punctuation mark like this - "Lol!" then there is no comma at all. Sorry to sound bossy but you do that sometimes and it's supposed to be inside it
Sometimes you replace "an" with "a" when it should be "an" but that's a confusing concept so I'll let that go. Trust me I do it a lot so no biggie
Other than those very few grammatical errors, there was no problems. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH I CAN'T WAIT FOR BOOK TWO AND THE NEW STORY!!!
Keep up the great writing!
~Em101cats~
P.S. Don't ask about the cheese and crackers thing. I love your stories so much I randomly said that XD
well derp for that XD and the comma thing is what I learned to do in school (elementary before u were in 4th grade) so its a bad habit that I cant stop D:
Oh. They taught that in school? Huh. They taught me that it goes inside. That's weird. Oh well. I hate bad habits XD but don't worry you'll grow out of the habit
I hope ):
Don't worry, I think you will. Try writing something where you type very very slowly, while thinking about possible mistakes you could make. I did that once and it really helped me not make mistakes and/or fix the ones I do make. It seems weird at first to type slower than you normally do, but trust me, it seemed to help me a lot when I had a bad writing habit.
lol k
I have worked super hard on this, that's while I haven't been reviewing much. I hope u enjoy! :3
Wait... You Liked (starred) your own book? How does that help you XD
it helps a lot for me acctully :/ idk how but I think it helps me spot more problems that I CAN control (unlike my comma situation)
wait nvm I thought u said STARED not STARRED lol