*Sorry that I skipped a few lines. I got 'Songwriter's Block' and had nothing else but the chorus and beginning. Sorry again, and thanks for understanding :D
Randomness glows in my eyes tonight,
Nothing normal to be seen.
An abundance of weirdness all around,
And it looks like I'm the queen.
The people are staring like I'm an alien inside.
Don't want to keep it in, let the strange things collide.
I am weird, I am weird!
No need to deny this fact.
I am weird, I am weird!
It's time to break this pact.
'Cause here I am, and all I can say is,
Go ahead and call me strange.
The normal people never bothered me anyways.
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This was funny
Um, you are awesome, 'cause I always make parodies of Let it Go, but I also complete them. I advise you, now you don't have song writer's block, that you go ahead and finish this song so it can be an actual parody, not just a little part of it.
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Hey, yo, puppys3117! Strangelove here on this PokeReview Day and I have a review for you! You know what, I can't count how much Frozen/Let It Go I've seen. I do eventually go on Wattpad, which is flooded with fan fiction and parodies and stuff, but there was a wave of those that hit YWS. Time to get onto the actual review
Lyrics
The lyrics aren't that bad overall. I mean, they express pride in themselves. "Ah, I love myself because I am weird!"-said a lot of people on this site. I understand that you should be proud to be weird, but are you really weird? I'm sorry, but it just doesn't feel right. It doesn't work together with the other factors to execute well
The actual beat
Yeah, I'm going to be honest, you must need to be a fast singer to actually perform this song. You jam big words which can cause a disruption. Songs need to be fluent, but for this to actually work, it would be extremely choppy and fast paced.
Overall, okay job.
Strange gives you...
Okay/10
Okay job,
Keep writing,
Stay groovy, my friend.
#TeamPlasmaStruck
1)I am a random duck 2) can sing very fast XD
Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day.
Which means...time to review!
- Nothing shouldn't be capitalized, yeah It looks good but It's grammatically incorrect.
After that comma It needs to be lowercase like the rest of the sentence.
Unless it's the start of a sentence, a name, place, title, etc. The first letter shouldn't be capitalized.
- I was quite disappointed that you didn't do the whole song.
What I suggest Is coming back to this and working on It once you have inspiration for the rest of the lyrics.
There are other frozen parody's so you could look some up on the internet.
Other than that, It's hilarious. It made me laugh several times and I smiled while reading this. Very intertaining, and funny.
You did a wonderful job this.
Keep writing!
Sincerely, Scarlet; Member of #0000BF ">Team Aqua!
clubs/1983 - #0000FF ">Team Aqua Headquarters
Thank you, and I am still thinking over the lyrics
Hey hey hey, Puppy. Let's jam.
I know you left off bits and pieces because of that darned writer's block--and I can't hold it against you.
My first question is in regards to the line
I understand the difficulty of fitting rhymes, but this is soooo forced. Explore your options--including the option of changing the word that comes before it (i.e. fact). It's never a good thing to force rhyme. Consider it the Achilles heel of rhyming poetry/songwriting.
Besides that, your final line crumples the rhythm of the words so you can fit in "normal people" in place of "cold" in the original. I'm inclined to ask if you've considered your rhythmic options here as well. Normals, borings,
muggles, etc. The less you rush your rhythm, the better. That probably goes without saying.I know you said you had writer's block with the second verse and bridge, but if it helps any, the bridge to Let it Go is a harmony of the verses, which means it has the same beat pattern, only changed in melody and a little bit of the rhythm. It's hard to explain without using music-theory terms. Anyway, it just means that if you can write the second verse, you can write the bridge.
I'd love to see more of it!
Lumi
Thanks, and I will work on it
Hello! KatyaElefant here for another review! Happy Review Day! Let's see what we have here.
So whenever I review on of these, I always sing the song. It goes right along with the tune and I am grateful for that. You could be a little more original in some of your stanzas and not just take some things from the original song. I know it's hard to find something different but it always helps to look up things that you are writing about. Like I wrote a parody about letting go my cat, so I looked up stuff about holding cats. (I'm weird like that) You can always organize your piece into stanzas. I hope your songwriter's block has left you(the past is in the PASTTT) because I would love to hear more of this song. I could even help you if you would like. I always want to help my fellow citizens on YWS.
I love the lyrics. I would definitely sing this is the shower if I could memorize it. (I barely sing in the shower so that is a compliment XD) The overall theme is great. I want to sing this to my friends and them just going...she's a weirdo alright. XD Great job with this piece. I would love to see more. Have a nice review day! Keep calm and keep writing!
by Team Rocket.
Yay! Shower songs XD And I'm freakish, ask Em101cats or dogsrules5 :3
but I don't wanna ask them XD
Fine, then u have no proof :3
XD oh gosh. I have to ask them now...
Yes.. *goes to Dollar Store, grabs giant water bottle and slowly drinks it* Yes, you do >:3
*slowly moves to PM them*
*stares at her while she types and takes another sip* o3o
*finishes typing and sends PM* *steals giant water bottle* *takes a sip*
O3O NUUUUUUUUU! MIIIIINE
but I want water.....
Fine you can have it, they are only a dollar :3 *grabs another and sips it*
*gives cashier a dollar bill and buys skittles*
lol
*slowly walks away from overpowering sense of weirdness*
you guys should be the stars of randomosity
XD This is no where near random (in my world at least)
Same here o3o I have been more random before, I'm just waiting for the right moment to show it XD
Knight r4 here to review this work. I haven't done a review for a while so I decided to take a look at this work and see Frozen get mocked!
I certainly hope this helps.
. This did add to the humor of the song, but I thought you could have made it sound slightly more professional.
Oh wait! I almost forgot to ask. *Are you really weird?* Of course you aren't. Right? Hehehhe! Just kidding! 
I luv dis peace!!!
Now I may be wrong since I don't know the tune to let it go, but I am not quite sure if all these words go to the music. Then again, that may have been intentional. Who knows?Uh...you do of course.
I kind of got the same impression from this that you were trying to make the song sound as horrible as you possibly could. You even made yourself look like a weirdo.
My overall impression was that you were pretty much trying to mock the song...duh! However if this was intended to be a real, *professional,*parody you didn't do the best job. Happy writing!!!
No, I am weirder than adult jokes, and you can ask Em101cats or dogsrule5 and they will say the same. I am no where near professional and this wasn't meant to be XD
Umm...
All I can say is that you sound exactly like a few of my friends. Also, you should put more meaning into the words and maybe make it a bit longer. I've never reviewed a song before and I don't know what to say...
I like it though, it was creative. But there was a feeling of randomness you might want to check out. I liked it in general, but you might want to do something more, I don't know, else?
I suck at songs
all I can say XD
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