HAHA! Nice poem! The first stanza had me grimacing, though. " made from old sows' ears and dead calves feet" REALLY? I wonder if they DO serve that...........ugh, anyway thank god my family doesn't ever go to Mcdonalds
There aren't much errors in this poem, except that maybe you should capitalise the first letter of each line, cos' it gives a better impresssion. :p
Anyhow, this was funny. Write more!
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