This was a very interesting poem, I really liked it! For the most part I could seen any punctuation errors, which is good!
But as for the first line "My dream catcher is very nearly full" that doesn't make sense, you should take out the "very" in that line. "and the nightmares start to slip out the web"
I feel it should be "and the nightmares start to slip out OF the web" or "as the nightmares begin to slip from the web." Just a could of ideas, but for the most part it was a very intriguing poem! Keep writing, you're great!!
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